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Jun 12, 2008 13:42



I've known mornings
white as diamonds
silent from a night so cold
such a stillness
calm as the owl glides
our lives are buried in snow

… burdened bands gain strong hands
gaping holes where diamonds should be
must have been morning that stole them
a glint of white in the pocket of winter

- Alela Diane, “White as Diamonds”

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leonhart_17 June 12 2008, 18:59:19 UTC
wow...this is incredible and heartbreaking...i don't normally pity bella but it's impossible not it in this...and jacob is wonderful and breaks my heart...

great job on this...

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ophelietta June 12 2008, 20:22:33 UTC
The more I write fic, the harder I find it to dislike Bella. And oh Jake's awesomeness outlasts everything.

Thank you.

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leonhart_17 June 13 2008, 00:07:02 UTC
well that's because your bella is infinitely more realistic than smeyer!bella...

and you're right about jake's awesomeness...

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ophelietta June 12 2008, 20:27:02 UTC
Bah. GAH. *INSIDES EXPLODING WITH DELIGHT*

I love screwing with the canon, so, so much. It's like some small, petty revenge against Meyer. XD

*still doing a happy dance at this comment*

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ophelietta June 12 2008, 20:36:47 UTC
TOO MUCH CAFFEINE?

Such a thing is not scientifically possible. RLY.

Although it does help with ze dance marathons.

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retroshine June 12 2008, 19:30:32 UTC
Oh, God. That's really sad. Poor Bella. Poor Edward. POOR JACOB! It's gorgeous, but kind of sick, no?

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ophelietta June 12 2008, 20:20:30 UTC
Hahahaha, SICK and WRONG. These are my two specialties. I feel a bit guilty for torturing Twilight characters like this, but... XD

And thank you. :D

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ophelietta June 12 2008, 20:19:42 UTC
Gah, THANK YOU. Oh, the Bella, she is crazy like a crazy thing, man.

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ex_sui June 12 2008, 19:38:27 UTC
owwww. poor bella. poor jacob. ;_; wahh <3

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ophelietta June 12 2008, 20:18:35 UTC
We will bombard Jacob Black with tissue boxes and love, what. XD

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