Fic : The Still Hour

May 07, 2008 19:09



And with my own eyes, I saw the Sibyl of Cumae hanging in a glass,

And when the boys asked her, “Sibyl, what do you want?”

She said, “I want to die.”

- Petronius

She remembers humanity the way other people remember their childhoods, hazy and far off and golden, self-contained as a garden.

This is not her first memory, but it is the ( Read more... )

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lambbaby May 8 2008, 00:55:42 UTC
Somewhere along the lines of DCs metro system is my heart. I seem to have lost it there while reading this fantastic piece of work.

I have no words,really.This fic stole them all and left me with just heart-breaking tears and sadness.

This was just so...yeah. Still no words to describe this.I'll review again once I find some coherency.

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ophelietta May 8 2008, 02:29:59 UTC
Gah. Thank you. Just... thank you. All other words seemed to have vanished for me, too.

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catherine_heart August 10 2008, 16:40:26 UTC
yea...me too.

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asweetdownfall May 8 2008, 01:07:28 UTC
Oh damn. You slay me with your writing.

The ending is just..mindblowing. Amazing. The entire fic is amazing, really.

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ophelietta May 8 2008, 02:32:07 UTC
Oh man, the ending. The ending took - work (and several rewrites!) but I think I finally nudged it closer to where I wanted it to be.

And thank you.

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justbee02 May 8 2008, 01:51:14 UTC
Beautiful. The ending? Heartbreaking yet amazing.

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ophelietta May 8 2008, 02:33:19 UTC
Thank you. I was worried people were going to be like "OH NOEZ WHAT CRACK IS THIS ENDING, BURN IT TO THE GROUND" but. Then. You leave comments like this. And. Wow. Thanks, again.

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marycontraire May 8 2008, 02:23:51 UTC
I never, ever read fics where Bella is already a vampire, no matter how highly recommended they come. It's just a thing I have. I can't deal with vampire Bella.

But I made a very unusual exception for this, and I'm glad I did. It was beautiful and breathtaking and the ending was a perfect closure. I also like where you went with Bella's vampire superpower-- very appropriate.

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ophelietta May 8 2008, 02:35:48 UTC
It means so much more, to know that you don't usually venture in this area of the fandom but braved it anyhow. (And didn't run away screaming! XD)

Thank you.

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ennta May 8 2008, 02:31:41 UTC
Um. Well. Wow. You are awesome. Here, have a lifetime of servitude, courtesy of yours truly.

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ophelietta May 8 2008, 02:36:42 UTC
THANK you. And I suppose I owe you a box of conversation hearts, now. :D

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