Fic : House of the Sun

[ophelietta]

Nobody deserves to be loved. Love just is.

- Caroline B. Cooney

zero.

The wedding is magnificently awful.

Jake’s a groomsman, Rachel’s Maid of Honour. Rebecca looks utterly gorgeous not in the typical white gown, but in a pink flowered print dress, her long black hair curled to perfection and decorated with hibiscus, her smile like

Comments

[my_maverick]

Oh my gosh. This is just-woah. Indescribable. I'm seriously tearing up right now. It's such a great perspective and I love how you've managed to tell this so brilliantly from a POV we rarely consider. The way you weave Jacob and Bella's story and Rachel and Rebecca's together is just lovely. Oh man, I'm just-speechless after that. Seriously, this is awesome. Thank you so much for posting it.

[ophelietta]

THANK YOU. I love tackling J/B from different angles, and in my head, Rachel and Rebecca are just incredibly awesome and a huge influence in Jake's life.

And the weaving thing... I remember re-reading Twilight after I finished Eclipse, and it just jumped out at me how Rebecca turned down a scholarship to get married at EIGHTEEN and all I could think was : "WHOA. Was that on purpose, or was that on purpose?" XD

[o0ribbons0o]

-happy sigh- Amazing, as always. I had to think for a minute to remember who the hell Rachel Black was. 0_o Your style is beautiful, your ideas are original...omg -dies-

[ophelietta]

Hahaha, yeah, I think Rachel and Rebecca are mentioned exactly, um TWICE in Twilight. Trust me to take two characters who have no zero screen time and just RUN with them. XD

And thank you. :D

[caitlinsici]

I've read all of your stories, and they make me insanely jealous. If only Stephenie Meyer could write like you do! If only I,/i> could write like you, haha.

I adore this story. I want to take it and wrap in in a little box and keep it forever.

I love how it's from Rachel's POV rather than the stereotypical Bella/Jacob stance. Ahh! I can't even express how much this story makes me feel.

[ophelietta]

Thank you. :D And please keep writing, this world always needs more J/B fic!

I love J/B but I feel that there's already so much GOOD J/B out there, so I wanted to look at it from a different vantage point and BAM! There was Rachel, sarcasm and all. XD

[__dittany]

her kid brother possesses saint-like powers of forgiveness and this amazing capacity to love

I think I love you? Oh lord amazing amazing amazing.\
I always love your fic.
*is not coherent*

[ophelietta]

Thank you! I love you too, for keeping on reading and commenting on them. (Man, aren't you sick of me yet?) Seriously, I've been feeling down this week but the response to this fic is making me GRIN LIKE AN IDIOT. XD

[leonhart_17]

i love seeing the story from an outside point of view...someone that's not involved but at the same time is because its her family...

really great job!

[ophelietta]

Thaaaank you. Sometimes I look at J/B and think, "Man. Ordinary people must think this pairing is on CRACK." And even if it wasn't her business, Rachel MAKES it her business. XD