Fic : Summertime

Apr 05, 2008 19:12



two. fishes are jumping and the cotton is high

“So,” says Charlie at the breakfast table, trying to sound enthusiastic, “I thought that this weekend, we could go fishing with some of my friends, the Blacks.”

“… Okay?” says Bella. She’s eating Apple Cinnamon Cheerios and reading at the same time, her novel propped up against the back of ( Read more... )

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acrobate April 6 2008, 00:31:56 UTC
TONS OF LOVE. 6-YEAR OLD JACOB IS WIN. ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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ophelietta April 6 2008, 00:35:29 UTC
I WANT TO TAKE HIM HOME WITH ME. :D

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ophelietta April 6 2008, 00:38:01 UTC
Thank you~!

I cracked up so many times while writing this, seriously. It's comforting to know that it's still hilarious when outside the boundaries of my messed up brain. XD

Charlie is a romantic like that! You know he was totally rooting for Jake the whole time. ;D

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theblackbunny April 6 2008, 02:29:00 UTC
Aww. All your fics are like sweet and hilarious and genuinely lovely.
I want a tiny!Jake too :[

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ophelietta April 6 2008, 04:00:12 UTC
Thank you. :D

I think maybe we should make clones of werewolf babies and hand them out to tiny!Jake fangirls. Because that would be incredibly awesome.

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theblackbunny April 6 2008, 04:55:11 UTC
omg wantwantwant.

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flowrs4ophelia April 6 2008, 02:48:52 UTC
This is so cute I could just die. And it just so happens I've been listening to Sarah Vaughan's version of "Summertime" a lot lately so I quite highly approve of the title and lyrics you used. I looove that song. :)

“Look, Bella!” he sings, going up to her, where she’s still wrapped up with the red blanket and Anne Shirley for company. “We’re matching now!”
I love this part. It's just so like Jacob to be happy about falling in the water while Bella thought it was the end of the world, LOL.

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ophelietta April 6 2008, 04:09:34 UTC
Thank you. :D That's so cool, esp. since the Vaughan version is the one I used for reference.

(In my head, Charlie digs old jazz records and conceded to the name "Isabella" so he could call his first born "Ella", but Renee always called her Bella, and it just STUCK. Unfortunately. XD)

Jacob is virtually indestructible, so a little water = nothing. He was totally the kind of toddler who ran regularly into walls and fell down everywhere, just to pick himself back up laughing. XD

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leonhart_17 April 6 2008, 04:15:40 UTC
awww...baby!jake is the cutest thing ever! i can see him in my head!

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ophelietta April 6 2008, 04:25:01 UTC
I know. I want to steal him from Rachel and Rebecca's sisterly grip, tuck him under my arm like a football, and RUN AWAY, VERY FAST. XD

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fire_swan_bow April 6 2008, 05:18:49 UTC
"I want to steal him from Rachel and Rebecca's sisterly grip, tuck him under my arm like a football, and RUN AWAY, VERY FAST."
This comment = hilarious mental image
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Epic Win
XD

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ophelietta April 6 2008, 16:15:36 UTC
You know you want to, too! XDXDXD

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