Numb3rs drabble: "Sundown" (David/Liz, PG)

[sororcula]

I wanted to write something last night so I asked Candi for a prompt. She gave me David/Liz, "flowers," and I wrote this in like 10 minutes, haha. (I'm using Sand as my n100 prompt because I've already done Flowers there.) It felt SO good to write fic again.

Title: Sundown
Pairing: David/Liz
Rating: PG
Summary: It's the best light to watch her in.

Comments

[mustangcandi]

I think you already know how I feel about it but just in case you forgot...

Dolphin noises. I'm pretty sure I made dolphin noises. :)

I just love the way you write, especially the way you write David/Liz. Such elegance. Such love.

I flail. I flail a lot.

(Wasn't there mention of Liz's POV? I'm a greedy wench. I know. I've long since accepted it.)

[sororcula]

Lol what, the whole second half is her POV that I mentioned! :-P

I am glad that you liked it, at least the part that you read, lmao.

[mustangcandi]

Well don't I look dumb. That's what I get for reading things hurriedly. *goes to read every thing this time*

[sororcula]

LOL! In your defense, I probably made it sound like it was going to be a separately-posted sequel. BUT STILL. ;-)

[mustangcandi]

Ok, now that I've read the whole thing, slowly and carefully and I caught every thing...

I'm making extra loud dolphin noises and flailing so much I might throw my back out. *tries to settle down but can't*

This... this is why I will never forgive CBS for canceling the show. haha. I needed David/Liz to get HERE where you have them. *sighs*

At least in fiction, it's real. :)

*still needs to finish her own David/Liz fic. Oops.

[sororcula]

\o/ I'm glad it worked! :-D