Numb3rs fic: Second Look (David/Liz, R)

[sororcula]

Title: Second Look
Pairing/Characters: David/Liz, Don, Nikki
Rating: light R
Summary: In a few minutes she'll probably be sent to interview the victim's family or co-workers, run through the usual gamut of questions, ask about enemies or recent causes of stress.
Word Count: 590
Spoilers: none
Warnings: none
Notes: Unbetaed. Written for the numb3rs_het Summer

Comments

[magisterequitum]

HEEEEEE!!!!

I love it! Naughty doings at work. Hehe.

I am working on my challenges today and this week, so they should be done and ready to rock 'n roll soon.

[sororcula]

Haha. Sweet! :-)

[fyrefly101]

Love it! But tsk, they should be better behaved at work...

[sororcula]

Haha, yes, highly inappropriate. TSK TSK.

[mercilynn]

Ooooooh nicely done! ♥ I love the hints of the backstory in this (and you need to write that, too, where one of them seduces the other... and this is the day after... *g*)

Also, I love the way you snuck in kids! :-p

[magisterequitum]

I second the call for backstory!

[sororcula]

HMM.

[magisterequitum]

You know you want to.

=)

[mustangcandi]

There are really absolutely no words to tell you how much I love this fic. You know how very much I love David/Liz... but this was something altogether different. This was subtle and sexy; the secrecy, the daring to be so close at work, the underthings being casually slipped into her pocket. OMG. I really thought I might die a little before I finished reading. And then you go and write this: They're silent again, and then he brushes his fingers across the back of her hand. "I'll see you tonight." and I fall out of my chair because sometimes there is nothing sexier than just a subtle touch - one that can be disregarded by any onlooker who may have caught them, but one that means so much to the two sharing it. Then the promise of more later? My god. This was just gorgeous.

If I bribe you, will you write the "I'll see you tonight" part? LOL.

*points to self* I'm so greedy and I can't get enough David/Liz... least of all when the story comes from your pen. *hugs you*

PS

[mustangcandi]

Ok, so David/Liz aside... *struggles*... this fic was also full of wonderful imagery - the case, the crime, the scene. I could see them all from the few words you found to describe every thing.

The fact that this quiet interaction happened between David and Liz among the chaos of a case to be solved, that just makes it that much sexier. I'm not sure how normal that makes me, but *shrugs* I've been called worse. LOL.

And one more thing: She crouches to examine it and feels an ache burn through her thighs. She shifts and glances up, around the room, until she finds David.

*is dead* Thank you and good night.

Re: PS

[sororcula]

Oh, thank you, I'm SO thrilled that you liked it! I write David/Liz for YOU, so yours is the only opinion I really care about. ;-)

I have a few other fics due this month, but after that I'll attempt a little sequel for you. :-)

Re: PS

[mustangcandi]

I didn't like this, Sor... I FRIGGIN' LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! So much so I want this to be a scene in Season 6. COME ON!!!!!!! I'm not asking for much, am I? LOL.

And you made me squee with even the possibility that you might write more David/Liz. *goes to her happy place*

I'm going to try to work on both my entries today. I've got little nuggets of inspiration and for some reason I tend to write better when I have five minutes at work... which I might actually have today. LOL.

Thank you again for sharing this dear. I just love it.

[rodlox]

most definately very good at being covert - why, I bet even Colby didn't notice, and he's trained to see these things.

excellent!

[sororcula]

Haha. The original ending actually did have Nikki noticing, but I like it better this way. :-)

Thanks!