Comments | sororcula: Numb3rs drabble: Safe (Charlie, Don, Liz, PG-13)

sororcula

Numb3rs drabble: Safe (Charlie, Don, Liz, PG-13)

May 05, 2009 00:43

So, back in February I posted This Time and for some reason people clamored for a sequel. OKAY, YOU GUYS. I wrote one. I hope it's not lame! That's the problem with sequels. Always leave 'em wanting more, that's what I always say. (I actually never say that. "Fake it till you make it" is my cliché phrase of choice.) Forgive me for the title. It's ( Read more... )

numb3rs100, fanfiction, rated pg-13, n3 fic, drabbles, gen, numb3rs

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sororcula May 5 2009, 17:21:34 UTC

Thanks!

thewhiteowl May 5 2009, 09:52:38 UTC

Aw, boys.

I loved this line:
the familiar, savior's cry of "FBI!" sounding through the building.

And the guy who took Charlie is lucky he's only got bruises on his face, as opposed to his windpipe.

sororcula May 5 2009, 17:22:36 UTC

Thank you!

Ha, yes he is.

jlm110108 May 5 2009, 14:18:04 UTC

Very nice, Soror! You've said so much in so few words.

Jo

sororcula May 5 2009, 17:23:33 UTC

Thanks.

msgrahamcracker May 5 2009, 14:42:27 UTC

Very nicely done. It's amazing to me the emotion and angst that can be portrayed in such a few words. Every single line in this story held such impact and power that at time it left me breathless. Great job.

sororcula May 5 2009, 17:24:01 UTC

Oh, thank you! I'm so pleased you liked it.

rubynye May 5 2009, 14:55:39 UTC

When I saw this I hoped it was the sequel to "This Time", and when I saw that it was, how I squeed! And oh, it's even awesomer than I'd known it would be.

("Overexcited". Oh, LIZ. I can HEAR her saying that.)

sororcula May 5 2009, 17:24:26 UTC

Yay! Thanks. I'm so glad you liked it. :-)