Fanfic: This Life and the Next (Part Four: Chapter Eight)

[soricha]

Chapter Eight:

(Si mi chiamano Mimi - La Boheme - Puccini)

Ari sat in the old armchair watching the brunette prepare a meal of soup and bread. Alice had welcomed her with kind words while Louis offered to buy her a home of her own. She had refused, knowing that the older man had already fallen foul of many of his peers for choosing to marry

Comments

[kayesoob]

So I must have missed the first few parts you posted so I just finished reading through.
Sitting here in tears. Wow. What an incredible story. Great telling and I love the time period.

Any hopes on continuing it?

[neolithicdream]

Bravo! I have loved this since I first read Part One and look forward to Parts Six and Seven..they will be worth whatever the wait.
Love the creativity and admire your ability to write an entire Part before posting. Also I love your nods to earlier parts like Galileo and the Black horse....Bravo,bravissimo!!

[mscrazybird]

simply amazing,,,as always

[bose96]

wow... that was so tragically sad that I actually sobbed while reading it. It was brilliant how ari's actual death was almost insignificant and quiet like one could have almost missed it and then the dawning realization of the truth and the reality was so overwhelming and sad... and while Callie felt nothing I felt it all.. Bravo... I look forward to the next life and wished Callie would know right now that they will meet again. Thank you for this.

[walking_weapon]

ug, every damn time you make me cry. Why must I be such a sap? *sigh* Job well done.