This was an entry I wrote before when I still had a blog.

Sep 23, 2005 21:27

Specks of Passion
When you shout at me I hear a buzzing sort of noise, not the ones I hear during my sleep but somewhat the same sort of nothingness, the type I ignore most of the time and yet it's still there, waiting for me, swallowing the same oxygen from a pretentious room full of stuffed toys. They provide me emotionless guilt, and it drenches ( Read more... )

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star_flare October 16 2005, 05:03:24 UTC
It's really nice, though.

I love the imagery you use, the details, stuff like that. It's like this piece that runs on raw emotion. Really strong emotion.

because pain is an essay. I write to this day...
Awwww. That's such a nice metaphor, though.

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sordidlilthing October 16 2005, 14:12:03 UTC
Yup, very strong emotion indeed. I was in a shitty state when I wrote that.

Thank you very much for the comment, as always! :3:3:3

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