It Is Not Good That Man Should Be Alone

Sep 17, 2006 20:49

It Is Not Good That Man Should Be Alone

By Mushroom
A/N: Inspired by a friend’s story. Song by Sharon Cuneta. Title by God. Birthday fic for my sweetheart, followthecor.

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followthecor September 17 2006, 13:34:17 UTC
MY LOVE FOR YOU CAN BE SEEN FROM SPACE! :D

Quoting my favorites would be like quoting the entire story, really. This is such an appropriate birthday fic for me, I really don't know what to say. You know practically my entire emo and woe lovelife now, and I'm pleased to say that this story...really got to me. From the illicit bathroom sex, to the "my mom saw your pic on my wallet" thing and parental troubles, to screaming at your asshole seme and questioning if you're pretty enough to be loved by that one person who you can never replace with anyone else. Wow. Don't really know if you intended for the story to practically mirror me and that person, but it did. I really feel for Daniel, though, more than Nathan. When he said his lines I practically beat him to it in my head. :D I loved everything. Thank you.

Now ends the emo talk and begins the fangirling: OMG HAVE MY BABIES PLZKTHNXBAI I LOVE YOUUUUUUU~!

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sordidlilthing September 17 2006, 13:51:31 UTC
WOW. Seriously, I'm BEYOND happy that you liked the story. I had you in mind the whole time while I was writing it.

I really feel for Daniel, though, more than Nathan

And I know why. *hugs*

Thank you very much doesn't sum it up AT ALL. *loves you*

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kotomine September 17 2006, 13:40:56 UTC
“But the grandchildren.” She moans.

Hahaha... cute! <-- Yes I was reading this when I utterly declared its cuteness aloud.

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sordidlilthing September 17 2006, 13:52:38 UTC
Also my favourite line, hehe.

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himitsu_no_hime September 18 2006, 15:49:49 UTC
honey, i so loved your fic. ^____^

the drama was natural, the flow of the story was smooth and the way you pieced the elements together was just LOVE.. ^_____^

be careful though... let the new style flow out from you naturally... kasi if you don't, you'll be confusing the overall form of your fic... since the two styles are too different from each other. ^____^ so i got kinda confused somewhere... >__< sorry. ^^

but other than that, it really rocks!!! not the typical stuff you see online... ^___^ very original, lovingly made. for followthecor, no? hehe. really good. ^____^

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sordidlilthing September 18 2006, 16:09:49 UTC
Wai~ ♥ Thank you so much for reading and editing! *glomps you* I'll take note of your advice, I even confuse myself sometimes. xD

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hibimaosuki September 19 2006, 13:37:38 UTC
B-E-A-UTIFUL! *trying hard to imitate Jim Carrey*

Yes. Wonderful and fluffy not-too-heavily-romantic and emotion-driven and... I'd like to be more articulate, but sadly all I've got right now is the names of 31 people I've never met and probably never will, so...

It was great. ^_^ (Cor, salamat sa pag-pimp.)

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sordidlilthing September 20 2006, 12:15:59 UTC
*HUGS TIGHTLY* Ooh~! Thank you for your very kind words ♥

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caiphas October 14 2006, 15:36:57 UTC
Okay. I read it. And yes, I am on my bed ^^;

Very good story, remind me a lot of Yattera...or maybe everything reminds me of Yattera as of this moment XDXDXD Love the feel though! The way you presented it made it seem so normal and at the same time not. I like those kinds of moods :)

I can't picture any of the characters but I suppose that purposely left that out. Every time I think of Daniel that guy from Power Rangers Wild Force -- the silver wolf, I think -- pops into my mind O.O Blame the Power Rangers overdose!!! XS

Anyway, great work and good luck with the others you plan to do! :D

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sordidlilthing October 15 2006, 07:18:41 UTC
Thanks, dear! ♥

Actually I was thinking of Daniel Radcliffe the whole time. But Power Rangers is just as disturbing.

(I read all the manga you burned for me, and they're all so cute!!! ♥ Well, I haven't read the baseball thing yet, for some reason it weirded me out, and CUT, which I haven't finished. It was five o' clock in the morning, damnit. xD)

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caiphas October 16 2006, 08:00:46 UTC
Ooh. So you have. Reading yaoi manga till the early hours is fun! XD

There are some manga there that I took without knowing what was inside or what it was about. I couldn't find any summary in the site I took it from so I just decided to take my chances and see if it's any good. That baseball thing is one of those ^^;

I'm downloading the rest of the Oujisama Game series (Kaizoku Game and Ousama Game) as of the moment -- I find myself unable to stop T____T

Anyway, glad you like! XS

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