Comments | sor_bet: ficlet: "A Detour That Turned Into A Shortcut" -- rating: PG-13

sor_bet

ficlet: "A Detour That Turned Into A Shortcut" -- rating: PG-13

Feb 20, 2007 22:24

Title: A Detour That Turned Into A Shortcut
Characters: Remus, Trelawney, implied Remus/?
Word count: 319
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Unbeta’d. Manipulation.
Challenge: Random Character Assignment
A/N: Alternate version of Sidetracked, a drabble for lupin100. Just too fun to limit to 100 words.

ETA: now with a sequel, Paving The Way.

( You have a very complex aura )

my fics-hp, snupin

Comments 22

summerborn February 21 2007, 04:05:50 UTC

Hee! Dark and mysterious indeed. A fun little snippet!

sor_bet February 21 2007, 04:47:10 UTC

Thanks! I like the idea that Trelawney isn't always completely off. :-D

mnemosyne_1 February 21 2007, 14:12:10 UTC

The tarot showed that you are particularly receptive to dark, mysterious stimuli

Unfortunately for Sibyll, there's someone that fits the bill better than she does. *g* Too funny!

sor_bet February 21 2007, 15:50:03 UTC

Even when we get assigned other characters to interact with Lupin, the true Snupiner can make it all about the Snupin. :-)

inkgeist February 21 2007, 16:54:12 UTC

Thats for sure! I actually tried NOT to do Snupin and Remus made puppy eyes!

sor_bet February 21 2007, 17:53:35 UTC

And who can resist Remus' puppy eyes???

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neodandiesrule February 21 2007, 16:19:57 UTC

The drabble was already good ("I'd love to read your palm", I can totally hear her saying that in a suggestive tone XD) but the snupin-sandalwood-jealousy-animal in bed trick is even better ;)

sor_bet February 21 2007, 17:55:28 UTC

Well, in the first one, Lupin is a nice guy, and in the second, he's a little devious...which I'm beginning to like more and more. Note to self: did I memory the Snupin fic in which Lupin always lies to everyone? Because that was an awesome fic.

Glad you liked it! :-D

inkgeist February 21 2007, 16:53:00 UTC

I LOVE the idea of Severus being an animal in bed

sor_bet February 21 2007, 17:56:18 UTC

Heh. I figured that turnabout was fair play. XD

inkgeist February 22 2007, 02:38:35 UTC

Definitely - you even had Severus detecting the scent of another on his mate *dies*

sor_bet February 22 2007, 03:00:33 UTC

Why does it always take other people to point out the cool stuff I do with my writing? I didn't even think of that. :-)

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yesido February 22 2007, 05:49:33 UTC

Oh oh--I think that might be the only fic that includes the remotest presence of Trelawny that I like. You are some kind of comic genius.

sor_bet February 22 2007, 18:51:32 UTC

But Trelawney's great (as a character; if I knew her in real life I think I'd probably kill her)! How can she be bad in fics?

And I'm really not (a comic genius), but Trelawney! How can you go wrong with her (I ask again)?

Thanks for the excessive praise. One of these days I might even deserve it. :-D (Um, nothing to add in parentheses here. Except that. And that.)