LJ Idol, Topic 10: "Sticks & Stones"

[sonophax]

If there had only been one flyer, Tara would never have considered taking it home. Today, though, there were dozens. A security camera at the other end of the hall observed in critical silence as she unpinned it from the corkboard and slipped it deep in her backpack. The university hallway remained empty. She felt her cheeks burning as she

Comments

[imafarmgirl]

Nice piece of fiction. I appreciate all the details of what she is doing, thinking, and etc.

[sonophax]

Thank you! :) I'm glad they came across well, since they'd be so invaluable in answering the question of "why is she/are they doing this?"

[ecosopher]

Really well written entry. You held my attention all the way through :) I liked the way you built up the drama, how a movement can gain a momentum of its own and power beyond itself.

[sonophax]

Thank you very much! :)

[jacq22]

Nicely constructed and a great build up, very powerful.

[sonophax]

I'm glad you found it to be so; I was nervous on this one. Thank you :)

[kehlen]

Very life like.

[sonophax]

I'm glad she comes across as believable! Thank you for reading. :)

[basric]

WOW! Quite a story, I enjoyed it, (=

[sonophax]

Thank you very much! :D