LJIdol, Topic 8: "A Traveling Travesty"

[sonophax]

By the twelfth day, Jacob knew that the search parties would be beginning to cease their fruitless efforts to find him. A small tingle of guilt buzzed around his ears, but he waved it off with an absent minded flick of his fingers. This was probably the thirtieth time it had crossed his mind since beginning this voyage and, as such, it was

Comments

[jacq22]

A tale of the sea, and mystery. It has a great lethargic feel to it. He is going willingly. Excellent.

[sonophax]

Why, thank you! :)

[myrna_bird]

He was declared dead but the romantic in me wants to believe that perhaps he did find what he was looking for and is a castaway on an island somewhere.
This had a lovely mythological feel for me.

[sonophax]

I was actually hoping that sort of uncertainty would come through in it! My own inner romantic wants him to have found them as well. :) Thank you for reading!

[baxaphobia]

A very creative entry for sure! Really liked it!

[sonophax]

Thanks, I'm glad to hear it! :)

[michikatinski]

Fabulous use of the deadly sirens!

Well done. :)

[sonophax]

Thank you very much! :)

[cloworora]

What a clever twist on the epic myth. Awesome stuff.

[sonophax]

Glad you enjoyed it! :D