[fanfic] minsk, in technicolor

Aug 15, 2011 17:29

Title: minsk, in technicolor
Author: sonofon
Pairing: Belarus/Hungary, Hungary/England
Rating: PG
Warning: just "conspiracy, love, and Seconal"
Summary: of the confused youthful youth who have nothing, in six parts.
Notes: for merubear, the best and worst of all mangoshits. For minsk, kinsk, and other thinsk.

Because once the moment passed, nothing lingered. )

fanfic, hetalia

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the summer we high part one because my comment is apparently 5220 words LOLOOPS merubear August 16 2011, 00:56:50 UTC
AHAHA TROLOLO THIS IS FOR ME YOU'RE FINALLY DONE OH GOD I CAN'T WAIT AND AS I'M TYPING THIS I CAN SEE THIS SENTENCE AT THE END: "Elizaveta had to sit down. She whispered to herself: "Oh, my God."" AND I'M ALREADY EXCITED derp you said you loved derp and me and I am not a mangoshit LET'S GO FOR RUN-ONS AWWYEAH ( ... )

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the summer we high part two because nothing can stop me once I start oho merubear August 16 2011, 00:57:27 UTC
ELIZAVETA SEE YOU STILL REMEMBER ARTHUR; THE GIRL MUST'VE HAD SOME BROWS

"Inside the room Natalia was speaking in a low voice made of gibberish. There was a placemat spread over the worn table, a cup set out for each doll that was present. Four dolls total. She was speaking to them words of hate or words of disbelief. Wild mad cacophony, and Elizaveta thought of chaos.
"N-Natalia?" She turned."
MY LIFE MY LIFE SOMEONE HOLD MY HEART IT JUMPED OUT OF MY CHEST AND UGH GOD YOU USED THE TEA PARTY I KNOW I REQUESTED IT BUT DKJFNGKDFJGNDFG

oh natalia you are just like my esl mother

s e c o n a l M I N S K MYHEARTOHGODMYHEART

SHE WAS BORN IN A BORN OH MY H E A R T AND THEN SHE BLUSHED OH GOD JUST MAKE THEM MAKE OUT ALREADY AND HAVE SOMETHING BEAUTIFUL--HEY IT HAPPENED JUST SORT OF BUT IT WAS A FRIENDLY KISS OH TRUST OH ELIZAVETA OH

"I'M IN LOVE WITH YOU" THIS X4 FOR YOU, MY BFFUTEOTAEAT ( ... )

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Re: the summer we high part two because nothing can stop me once I start oho sonofon August 16 2011, 04:56:40 UTC
also i'm late to commenting on this but

SONOCAT

ford i love your nicknames, mangopear ♥

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Re: the summer we high part one because my comment is apparently 5220 words LOLOOPS sonofon August 16 2011, 01:26:51 UTC
I don't know how this response will turn out most likely everything will just jumble together into little separate paragraphs WELL OK HERE GOES

you should be a review critic seriously I can imagine you working at the NYT or something, just reading books and articles and spazzing over everything. I mean I'd read it.

"sad strange hippie song that sono probably has only heard twice in her life" WHAT IS THIS DESCRIPTION. WHY ARE YOU SO. STOP IT.

and um for the record, hostels are not always bad. I've stayed in some before because hotels are just so expensive and they are clean and perfect for poor students and I'd imagine that in this universe, there is such a hostel reserved for students of this university.

I just laughed at your lol. oh em gee

in response to part deux of your comment:"MY LIFE MY LIFE SOMEONE HOLD MY HEART IT JUMPED OUT OF MY CHEST ( ... )

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comrade of the summer we high m_nemonica August 16 2011, 01:07:17 UTC
i need to go shower after my run but this is totally a spot so that i can come back and read this grapeshi-

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Re: comrade of the summer we high sonofon August 16 2011, 01:41:56 UTC
i'm still sobbing she showed you the summer we high THAT TWERP

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xoxox Twerp merubear August 16 2011, 02:09:19 UTC
you mean hipstwerp ezyl August 16 2011, 02:13:33 UTC

leriacossato August 16 2011, 01:24:04 UTC
lakshglkhdgjfhkhsdjg so beautiful ♥

also
Englishwoman from Kent

wat

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sonofon August 16 2011, 01:37:13 UTC
t-thank you!! ♥

and i mean what

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leriacossato August 16 2011, 02:58:29 UTC
:3

gah why is your writing so hipster and flowery and beautiful and mine is always herp derp on the page

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sonofon August 16 2011, 03:54:16 UTC
idgi how is my writing hipster or flowery

but

thank you anyway! /// and no, that's not true at all. your writing is hardly herp derp. just derp okok no really you are the best

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tupelo_thief August 16 2011, 05:51:50 UTC
DI FGHDOIGFNJ

THIS.

THIS IS SOME EXCELLENT FUCKING SHIT RIGHT HERE B|.

whenever i see your stuff im like "yo how could you make that pairing work!?" and then i read it and im like "howd she DO that? HELLA CHEAT CODES" oh man, this was really amazing, and your dialogue as always is so boss. absolutely LOVE the way you wrote belarus and england, omg. hungary was of course well written as well, but those two were really something

BELARUS AND HER DOLLS.

I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE.

now picturing her sending them to have a tea party in space

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sonofon August 16 2011, 06:02:07 UTC
oh man oh man it always makes me so happy when you like my writing 'cause you have pretty much excellent taste in everything ;_; thank you!!

yes i'm picturing it
they're in space

and america is in a spacesuit, casually strolling by the whole mess; russia sits in the international space station and controls the observation deck while eating blini.

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THAT ICON. I AM-- I AM GOING TO QUIETLY SAVE THAT TO MY COMPUTER AND NOT EVEN ASK tupelo_thief August 16 2011, 06:08:42 UTC
jckhg kisgfh 8DDDDD thank YOU!

russia in space, that is...so maniacal XD

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IT IS BEAUTIFUL AND I HOPE YOU ENJOY sonofon August 16 2011, 06:13:18 UTC
russia in space is a hoot! I mean just imagine. Him. In space. While a sting quartet is playing and the guy-who-does-dramatic-voiceovers-for-movie-trailers is detailing his every move as he eats the blini.

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sonofon August 18 2011, 17:26:24 UTC
Thank you thank you! (: So glad you liked that passage and the fic.

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