Posting Fiction....

[sonofhephaestus]

Firstly, thanks go out to those who offered feedback solely on my world description alone. Now, we all know that descriptions of a world are far different than stories taking place in it. I mean, Communist Russia is a setting, but hardly the seeds of a story.

Here of course, is a story. It might take you some time to read it, but I believe the gist

Comments

[dragonflycai]

Finally finished reading it.

I enjoyed it and want more!

I think I'd need to read more in the world to possibly catch inconsistencies in your world.

Maybe it's because I'm reading as a multi-task, but nothing jumped out at me to critique.

Keep it coming, brother!