Comments | songofthepoets: 3 Poems

songofthepoets

3 Poems

Nov 11, 2006 05:45

Night Being (Freeverse)
Society in Overdrive (Freeverse- aa.bb.aa.bbb.c rhyming sequence)
The Shapeshifter (Freeverse)

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freeverse, poetry

Comments 10

imfusio November 11 2006, 06:25:30 UTC

Awesome poems, I especially like the second one right now because I can relate to it =P
Well done! =)

songofthepoets November 11 2006, 06:30:51 UTC

At 18 years old and just having graduated, new to the world of work and no school (at least until I start college in the spring), I can as well. But they say we write what we know. I do believe that is true. Thanks.

rachelfr November 11 2006, 10:42:21 UTC

i really like the first one & the idea of stars etc being related, it's so beautiful.

also can relate to the second poem.

really good well done x

songofthepoets November 12 2006, 01:13:41 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad you liked.

miseryeuphoria November 11 2006, 10:46:10 UTC

also really like the first poem & the use of imagery in the third one.

you mind if i add you?

xxx

songofthepoets November 12 2006, 01:16:44 UTC

Thank you, and of course you may add. I need some friends on here. :p I'll add you as well.

vanilla_munchie November 12 2006, 19:30:47 UTC

Loved the first one!!

songofthepoets November 12 2006, 19:53:27 UTC

Thank you.

t_aimer November 16 2006, 02:48:18 UTC

The 2nd is my favourite. :)

songofthepoets November 16 2006, 04:10:46 UTC

Everyone loves that one. Thank you!