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Apr 29, 2006 21:42

Title: Unresolved ( Read more... )

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msilverstar June 11 2006, 04:39:41 UTC
Bookmarked this, and I'm glad I came back. Despite some rough edges, the sexual tension is really effective. Nicely done.

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jira_rd June 11 2006, 04:48:29 UTC
Thanks! Yeah, I just reread it, and there were some bits that were rough. The reason for that being that I was writing it absolutely exhausted as finals rolled around, late at night. Tomorrow, when I'm more awake, I'll go back and fix the errors.

But I'm very glad you liked it! :D I've seen you around and I'm actually going through the Monaboyd archives myself just for the heck of it. XD I'm somewhere in early 2004.

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msilverstar June 11 2006, 04:58:00 UTC
Yay! I'm putting my notes on my del.icio.us list for later reccing. I encourage you to do recs, it would be interesting to see what stands up over time.

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jira_rd June 11 2006, 05:00:00 UTC
Yeah, I saved the recs I have so far, and once I get up tomorrow I'm starting on where I end tonight ((obviously. It wouldn't make sense to just randomly read. :P)).

Though, for all the good, there is a lot of crap. ><; Or maybe it's just my refusal to read things that haven't been spaced and are nothing but one block paragraph. And the occasional spelling and grammar mishap is fine, but no more than three or four in a story unless it's way long.

... *grammar rant done*

Sorry. :D

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msilverstar June 11 2006, 05:05:44 UTC
Nono! I agree with you about the formatting, I need my blank lines! Though one is good, two is too many. Hmmm, maybe I'll mention that to someone with a monaboyd epic and double lines between... Grammar and spelling matter

*joins you in ranting*

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jira_rd June 11 2006, 05:07:09 UTC
It's strange, it's like hitting ff.net when you see it formatted like this.

"..." said Dom.

"..." said Billy.

Dom did this. Billy, in return, did that.

"..." said Dom.

And it's all WTF?!

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