claire&dean | build up a new us of flowers and blood

Jul 07, 2010 23:37

BUILD UP A NEW US OF FLOWERS AND BLOOD
claire/dean(implied dean/castiel). pg-13. au after the rapture; warnings for underage relationship. ~1,950
She remembers space.
(c) title from flowers and blood by mariee sioux.

a/n: i’m a horrible human being.

She's making up incantations, the old language soft and worn on her tongue, but it’s not the same, she knows it's not. He doesn't notice. )

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devilyouwere July 8 2010, 15:51:20 UTC
I originally planned it to be one-sided and then I thought I needed a little more justification to make it less creepy. I think I made it more creepy, Idk. I'm glad you still read it, though! It's definitely new territory for me, so I'm glad that it worked for you, even though it was a little bit left of center. And, gosh, thank you ♥ (as always)

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devilyouwere July 8 2010, 15:52:33 UTC
At least it has an impression! I don't know what posessed me to write this, but I think, just for the theme and content, it could possibly be one of the most disturbing things I've ever written in fandom. So I'm glad that it worked and that you could still get some emotional response out of it. Thank you ♥

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lexhibition July 11 2010, 15:37:59 UTC
Oh, YES I love this. It's it's it's...all hard edges and wrong and the opposite of perfect. All the things you say and, even more, the things you don't. Just...not quite heart breaking, but somehow worse because it's just keeping the muscle alive to hurt it some more. Basically I want to eat it up with a spoon and possibly get a stomach ache, you know?

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devilyouwere July 13 2010, 14:44:22 UTC
*flaps hands* Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it (and that you enjoyed it because it was so wrong). And I do totally know what you mean because I am itching to write more. ♥

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metonomia July 12 2010, 22:42:47 UTC
Oh WOW, this is crazy good. It was such a rush reading it, tripping forward with the words, and just WOW. OH CLAIRE. I love it!

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devilyouwere July 13 2010, 14:45:35 UTC
Thank you!! I'm glad you enjoyed it and Claire, too. Never written her before, so I'm glad my characterization sufficed :)

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