Fairgrounds and Ferris Wheels (1/1)

Feb 16, 2011 21:33

Title: Fairgrounds and Ferris Wheels
Author: somehowunbroken 
Fandom: SGA/SG1
Characters: John/Cam and Vala
Word Count: 2,167
Rating: PG
Notes: For dizzydame, who won me in the qldfloodauction and wanted John/Cam with bff!Vala, possibly at an amusement park. This is set at a fair, but I figured it was sort of the same, so I hopy ou like it :)

Fairgrounds and Ferris Wheels )

rating: pg, stargate, john/cam, charity

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camshaft22 February 17 2011, 03:31:06 UTC
I love this. It is so very good!

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somehowunbroken February 17 2011, 03:32:59 UTC
Thanks dear :)

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dizzydame February 17 2011, 03:31:10 UTC
Oh my god, that is pretty much everything I wanted out of that prompt. I adore Vala and I love John and Cam getting their time together, and the ferris wheel - that entire bit was just so perfect.

Favorite bit:

“I moved a little,” she tells them before either man can say anything. “I talked to that nice man who makes the Ferris wheel go. He’s such an interesting person.” She smiles and wiggles her fingers in the direction of the operator’s booth, and Cam gets that too, her making it last for as long as she could, and he doesn’t even know how to be thankful for her and her strange brand of understanding and caring and giving.

I absolutely melted at that. I could just see it in my head, Vala's little wave and the look that would be on Cam's face. Thank you so much for this! :D

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somehowunbroken February 17 2011, 03:36:07 UTC
Yay, I'm so glad you liked it! Cam's so lucky he's got a friend like Vala :) And thanks for bidding on me and helping out with the charity!

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sexycazzy February 17 2011, 03:43:37 UTC
I love Vala! She's awesome! :) and John & Cam - loves the little touches at the fair esp with the wristbands!

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somehowunbroken February 17 2011, 04:12:05 UTC
Thanks dear :) I really like the wristband thing for some reason...

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virkatjol February 17 2011, 03:45:37 UTC
dizzydame told me I had to read this cause your Vala was amazing amounts of adorable. So I did. and SHE IS!! <33333333333 your Vala. It's epic. It's my first venture into C/J fic and I can't say i disliked it. :) I can ship it. You are a great writer! I'm glad that she sent me over here to read it.

AGAIN YOUR VALA IS AMAZING!!!

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somehowunbroken February 17 2011, 04:13:40 UTC
Wow, thanks so much! I haven't written Vala all that often, which is silly because she's so awesome. And hey, if you find you liked Cam/John, I've for sure got a lot of that floating around here :D Thanks for reading and I'm glad you liked it!

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virkatjol February 17 2011, 04:24:07 UTC
We'll see. Do you have a rec of your most favorite? Smut or not doesn't matter I'm open to everything! Just good fic is love and hey maybe I'll dig it too! (if there is another with Vala that would be good) :)

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somehowunbroken February 17 2011, 04:30:53 UTC
Favorite, well, that's a tricky thing, because the one I like the most isn't all that popular and I'm not sure why, so I'll give you the link and you can decide whether or not you want to read it - Storms In The Skies We Live In.

As for stories with Vala - there's a standalone called Helping Hands, and then a two-parter that starts with Bonding and goes to Next. And there will eventually probably be a third part to that as well, but that's what there is for now.

And, in the vein of shameless self-promotion, a link to my master list, which you can feel free to ignore :D

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emeraldsnakes February 17 2011, 03:49:55 UTC
Oh Vala, you're so awesome!!

giving the boys a nice date, then the ornaments to remember it. Not to mention the stuffed tigers.

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somehowunbroken February 17 2011, 04:18:35 UTC
In my head is something like this:

Teal'c is expecting Vala Mal Doran to visit tonight. She had mentioned to him a plan of her involving Cameron Mitchell and Colonel Sheppard, and a Ferris wheel, and he had nodded to her and wished her well but had declined when she had invited him along. He has been to a fair, once, and once is quite enough.

When the knock comes, excited against his door, Teal'c opens it to find Vala Mal Doran in the hallway, holding some sort of stuffed wild animalin an unrealistic color. He raises an eyebrow.

"Got you something, Muscles," she says happily, shoving it towards him. Teal'c plucks it form her hands and studies it. "It's a tiger."

"I believe tigers are orange and black," he tells her, turning it this way and that. He's quite certain that he's correct.

"Mine is green," Vala Mal Doran shrugs as she pushes past him into his quarters. "And let me tell you, they had other ones, too..."

:D

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virkatjol February 17 2011, 04:25:53 UTC
AHHHHH THIS!!! HAHAHAHAH OMG!!! <33333 Now i'm glad I came back to comment spam you again!! I MIGHT LOVE WHEN SHE CALLS HIM MUSCLES!

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somehowunbroken February 17 2011, 04:31:35 UTC
:D

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