third time's a charm (1/1)

[somehowunbroken]

Title: third time's a charm
Author: somehowunbroken
Fandom: SGA/SG1
Characters: John, Ronon, Cam, Daniel
Word Count: 5,040
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: non-con, violence, torture, character death (but not a main character)
Notes: Set in the hazy post-series future, after Atlantis returns to Pegasus. For sian1359, my recipient in this year's sheppard_hc exchange. Happy holidays, and I hope you

Comments

[camshaft22]

This is really good! My heart's pounding.

[somehowunbroken]

Thanks dear :) Writing this was... quite an adventure, believe you me. :)

[sian1359]

Wow, first out of the box, and exactly what I wished for, with the menace, the danger, and SG-1 along for the ride. Kolya will always be my favorite nemesis for John. Thank you so much, Santa Somehowunbroken (which is also a perfect name for your John -- and all the boys).

[somehowunbroken]

Wow, thanks so much, dear! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

And I'm glad that Kolya worked for you - wasn't sure if it would work out the way you wanted it to, but I also think that he's a great nemesis for John, so I went with him :)

[somehowunbroken]

Ah, John and his sense of responsibility. :) Glad you liked it, dear!

[sherry57]

Wow, powerful stuff!! Thanks so much for this. I love Koyla stories and this one is no exception. He must be a great baddy to write......you certainly made him a geart baddy to read and I loved the whole interaction of our four boys. Great stuff...thanks!!

[somehowunbroken]

Thanks so much! I feel like using Kolya is almost cheating in a fic like this... he pretty much writes himself :) Glad that you liked it!

[jlnyr]

I liked this. But am I right in assuming it's AU as Kolya is still alive? Because in the series John killed him.

[somehowunbroken]

Well, yes, it's an AU :) There's still that thought in the series that he's maybe still around, though, since he came back in Remnants - always that fear in the back of John's head that he might show up again...