Doesn't-Aren't-Isn't(Is) (1/1)

[somehowunbroken]

Title: Doesn't-Aren't-Isn't(Is)
Author: somehowunbroken 
Fandom: NCIS
Characters: Tony/Ziva
Word Count: 1,175
Rating: G
Prompt: Tony and Ziva, not too fluffy..
Notes: For purple_cube, who bought me in the help_pakistan  auction and asked for a Tony/Ziva fic without too much fluffiness. I hope you enjoy it!

Comments

[theeverdream]

Oh! That's awesome! I love how it shows the relationship changing over time - and I like the not so fluffyness of it. I think these two wouldn't really be fluffy - moving in together like that and it not starting like this huge thing.... Also, you did really well with Ziva's voice - I could totally hear her in my head as if she were on the show.

[somehowunbroken]

Thanks dear! I haven't written NCIS in, oh, two years? But I still read some and still follow the show, so I figured I'd put some in the auction and see what came of it :) Glad you liked it

[theeverdream]

Well you're definitely not rusty! :D

[purple_cube]

Okay, firstly - I cannot believe you managed to write this already!

Secondly, I can't believe you managed to write something so awesome already! It's just fantastic! I love your characterisations, and the way it's written fits them so perfectly - the way they deny that it's a relationship for so long, letting it build and build until one day Tony thinks he should be scared of it, of them, and realises that he isn't.

I would pick out some of my favourite bits but then I would be quoting pretty much all of the story, so I won't...

Thank you so much!!!

[somehowunbroken]

I'm so glad you liked it! It was a lot of fun to write :)

[colls]

This was SO in character for them and highlights so much about what I like about these two. Also, I really like the way you write relationships.

[somehowunbroken]

Wow, thanks :)

[cantarina1]

Heaaaaaaaaarts. I think I like this pairing better when it's not mushy and it's so spot on that in the end, Tony (comes across as) the vulnerable one. You know that Ziva's just as unsure, but she keeps everything locked up so tightly! This is lovely and organic, in terms of a coming-together story <3

[somehowunbroken]

Thanks so much :) Neither of them are really the mushy type - well, okay, Tony can be when he's laying it on thick, but it's not who he really is. Part of what I like about the is their banter :) Glad you liked it!