A Perfect Family (1/1)

[somehowunbroken]

Title: A Perfect Family
Author: somehowunbroken 
Fandom: SGA
Characters: Evan/David
Word Count: 3,173
Rating: PG/mpreg, minor swearing
Summary:Well, when you write an mpreg story, you pretty much have to follow it up with a story that has a baby in it, right? Umm... yeah. Sequel to Unforeseen Side Effects.
Notes: Well, this turned out longer than I thought it would be.

Comments

[theeverdream]

(Talking about it had really been the two of them sitting in stunned silence, one of them occasionally saying “Twins?” in a voice that made it clear that, yeah, this was just getting weirder by the day.)
She blinked a few times and shut them again, snuggling into the crook of Evan’s arm, and Evan found himself blinking a few times, too.
“I’d change my name, too, you know,” he said softly,

Awwww. I think I have melted into a puddle of goo.

[somehowunbroken]

Good goo, I hope, not the purple sticky stuff that started *this* whole thing. :D

[theeverdream]

Hehee! Yeah, less the alien goo with interesting side effects and more the killed-with-adorable type :D:D

[somehowunbroken]

:D Oh good.

[londonsabre]

SO CUTE!

[somehowunbroken]

Glad you liked it!

[clwilson2006]

OMG. OMG. I spent the first half laughing, because, well I've been there. and Oh God, Twins! I can't believe you did that! (no, actually I can, in the same way you squished a line about Mitchell in there!)
And then it's all *awwwww* and *sniff* and so CUTE!!! and you used my name suggestion - I pretty much went sub-sonic with the squee at that point.

I love you!

[somehowunbroken]

I just wouldn't be me if I didn't sneak Cam in. :D And I loved that name - seemed like a great idea, naming the girl after their moms.

Love you too!

[spacedogfl]

Though I'm not one prone to emotional outbursts: squeeeeeee!!!! This is absolutely beautiful! "Evan and David, Angela and Robert. Lornes, all of them. A family." Loved it! Though saddling them with twins is just evil ;)

[somehowunbroken]

Yes. I'm an evil person. Expect hilarious twin stories to come, from changing nappies to Woolsey babysitting to John not being able to tell them apart. :D

[spacedogfl]

Oh yeah! I can't wait to see Uncle John in action!

[sexycazzy]

Read both stories and loved both of them!

I'm beginning to like Parrish/Lorne which is a nice surprise, all thanks tot he Lorne Summer Fest! :-)

This is just lovely and cute and sooo sweet!

[somehowunbroken]

Oh yes, Lorne Summer Fest has opened my eyes to a whole bunch of new possibilities... :D Glad you liked them!