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somehowunbroken

Sensitivity (1/1)

Jul 21, 2010 14:20

Title: Sensitivity
Author: somehowunbroken
Fandom: SGA
Pairing: Evan/David
Word count: 947
Rating/warnings: PG-13/language
Disclaimer: I don't own Stargate: Atlantis.
Prompt: Lorne/Author's Choice - In an offworld lab Evan gets infused with a pair of wings.

( Sensitivity )

evan/david, rating: pg-13, stargate

Comments 26

saphirablue July 21 2010, 18:40:48 UTC

I have to admit that I don't like Evan/David but I read the fic for the wings... I have a thing for wings and picturing Evan with white Angel wings: *lol* So great!

Thank you for this fic! :)

somehowunbroken July 21 2010, 19:14:40 UTC

I had thought originally to make it Evan/John, but I couldn't resist having John just make fun of him for it, so I went with Evan/David :)

clwilson2006 July 21 2010, 18:53:48 UTC

Wing!fic my utter utter favourite!! Lorne wih wings! whoo-hoo

now I want to know what happens next, wing!porn with my favourite pairing.

Luv U

somehowunbroken July 21 2010, 19:15:42 UTC

If I had any artistic talent, I would draw Lorne with wings and the death glare from the lunch table. I'd love to see angry!wings!Lorne.

What happens next... hmmm... perhaps :)

nanuk_dain July 27 2010, 15:46:12 UTC

All right, you really got me here. I love this story, and when I read your comment about wanting to have a picture of Evan with his wings and a death glare at the lunch table, I just couldn't get the image out of my mind... So I made it. I draw, too, but I'm more the photo manipulation kind of artist, so I hope that's fine with you. So here's your death-glare-lunch-table-Lorne: http://pics.livejournal.com/nanuk_dain/pic/0003czf4 I'll post it at my Lj later, but I'll make sure to credit you and your great story (btw, I'd love to read the whole sex-with-wings that would have followed... XD). Thank you so much for the inspiration and I hope my wee art pleases you. Keep on the great work!

somehowunbroken July 27 2010, 16:32:42 UTC

AHHHH!

That is just perfect! Sweet mercy, you've just made my day. This is my desktop picture.

Seriously, that's pretty much exactly what I had pictured :) Thank you so much!

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samjohnsson July 21 2010, 22:28:47 UTC

Loved it. And would be par for Pegasus. Surprised you had them stop at the waist, though. Any reason he didn't end up with proportional, usable ones?

somehowunbroken July 22 2010, 01:29:31 UTC

...mostly so he couldn't actually fly, because that makes him just that much more annoyed with them :)

Glad you enjoyed it!

jya_bd_cp_ttgb July 21 2010, 22:35:39 UTC

Of course he tried to fly with them. *shakes head*

somehowunbroken July 22 2010, 01:31:06 UTC

Of course!he did! It was the second thing he did, right after glaring at Dr. Lansing till his brain melted a little.

theeverdream July 22 2010, 08:34:59 UTC

Okay so, I think probably Dr. Lansing's brain melted from the force of the glare? But I'm imagining Lorne glaring so darn hard that his own brain just can't handle the stress of trying.

somehowunbroken July 22 2010, 08:42:09 UTC

...well, I meant the first, but with how angry Evan is... could be either.

emeraldsnakes July 21 2010, 23:42:31 UTC

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!! *glomp*

So, I was the one to prompt this...and to see it written is awesome. What makes it even more awesome is that *you've* written it. I love your writing. You've had me in love with it since the first fic you posted to sg_flyboys.

Loved the little comment on Evan trying to fly. Very flyboy of him. I also like that you made them sensitive too. I see wing!porn in the future.

somehowunbroken July 22 2010, 01:33:34 UTC

Well, if he could get the wings to work, that would be one thing he flew that John could never compete with... :)

Glad you liked it, especially since it was your prompt!