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soliandxpyne

Sanzo/Goku Drabble

Apr 09, 2009 00:54

It didn’t occur to Sanzo to ask until the ache went past ‘pleasant’ to ‘weary,’ and Goku still showed no signs of flagging.

“Is this because of that stupid woman at the temple we stayed at last night?” he demanded with slowly dawning suspicion. “The one who claimed to be a priestess?” And damn, he could really go for a cold beer right now ( Read more... )

sanzo/goku, drabble

Comments 10

gen50 April 9 2009, 09:44:15 UTC

*claps*
thanks!

soliandxpyne April 10 2009, 04:15:23 UTC

::laughs:: Glad you enjoyed this! <3

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soliandxpyne April 10 2009, 04:16:02 UTC

Thanks so much~♥ :D

eyesofshinigami April 9 2009, 14:51:15 UTC

*cheers* YAY! Look at you go! \o/

Hot, hot, hot! I loved it. :D And I love your Goku here! He's just so damn adorable when he gets all jealous and possessive. But of course, Sanzo handles it like a pro. In more ways than one.

It's good to see you writing again!

Are you free tonight? I'll text you later and maybe we can chat for a bit! ♥

soliandxpyne April 10 2009, 04:22:45 UTC

I'M A MACHINE. ಠεಠ

Oooh thanks, I'll admit this ficlet was inspired by the fact that everyone wanted Sanzo's ass to eat in the original JttW, it was ridiculous. XDDD

Yesss, I'm so pumped to be writing again~~~♥♥♥

geri April 10 2009, 03:42:20 UTC

I LOVED THAT LAST LINE WITH GOKU TAKING ADVANTAGE OF SANZO'S BITING SARCASM BY BITING BACK.
YES GOKU'S MATURITY IS SLOWLY BUILDING UPTO A CLIMAXX OF THE BEST KIND.

soliandxpyne April 10 2009, 04:25:33 UTC

Yes, best kind! Heehee, glad you liked this X)

purpleicicles April 10 2009, 14:39:07 UTC

“I’m not jealous!” the brunet fumed. “It’s just--you didn’t even say anything! You just let her think you...that you weren’t--”

“Irreparably homosexual?

*LARF* Oh my goodness, I would pay money to hear Sanzo say that!!!! XD Loving Goku's thought processes and how comfortable with the whole thing Sanzo is.

Goku’s frown, however, didn’t lessen, and the suddenly meticulous care he took in massaging the cooling seed that slipped down between older male’s thighs into the skin made something tighten low in Sanzo’s belly.

Gnyah... *melts*

♥

soliandxpyne April 15 2009, 23:46:31 UTC

Heehee, glad you liked it. X) I think Sanzo is the type who tends not to state the obvious because it's, well, obvious (at least to him), so it's even more amusing when he'll just come out and say something like that.

Ahaha, and I'm glad you enjoyed that line, too. Xpyne made a comment about finding that a bit gross (but didn't tell me to take it out!). But sometimes guys are gross, or...very visual about sex, I think, and it just increases their charm. :B I wouldn't want to be accused of writing two guys having sex like one of them was a woman with a penis, LOL!