Drabble

[soliandxpyne]

He didn’t say, “I’m hungry,” because really, he wasn’t.

He didn’t say, “Come find me,” because honestly, he wasn’t sure if there was ever anyone else.  Maybe he was the only one, and this was how it’d always been.

He didn’t say, “I’m lonely,” because he didn’t know it was any different from, “I am.”  At least until one day a bird fluttered

Comments

[soliandxpyne]

eeeee! ♥ thank you very much! i tend to hide files i write on my computer so soli will never see them and make fun of me even though my computer is my own and password protected and no one uses it but me. Oo;;; ahaha, and as a result i also tend to forget about and lose things in sock puppet folders with file titles like, "lab report 3"... anyway, point being that i stumbled across this recently and thought oh! this isn't so horrible... perhaps i'll go post it. :d i think i must have written it quite a while ago, inspired by back when there was a lot of discussion about Sanzo and Goku's "mental link".

thank you! i was definitely going for a parallel structure thingie. Goku's answer when Sanzo pressed him, "I know I said I wasn't but I guess I was always callin' in my heart." in the burial arc just always struck me so powerfully! i think we can probably all relate to some degree with the feeling of desperately yearning for something in our hearts, and kicking up the intensity of that feeling, to nearly unbearable heights, was my feeling, I think, when I tried to write this. :p

[eyesofshinigami]

Of course it didn't suck! <3 It was just lovely. And I really enjoyed your style of writing, too. It really added something to the piece.

YAY! But you're right, that's always been something that's fascinated me. And I know what you mean about the whole yearning thing. You did a fantastic job capturing that here. *le sigh*

Gonna send your calendar out on Thursday, since it'll be the ONLY day I can get out this week. Between school and work, Imma die. *is dead*

[soliandxpyne]

Between school and work, Imma die. i know EXACTLY how you feel! x__X no rush, take your time, remember to sleep and eat... ♥