Saiyuki drabble

Apr 22, 2007 14:37

The day is inordinately warm for this time of year, but there’s a cool breeze at their backs, and the sunlight makes them all a little drowsy.

The two in the back of the jeep are mercifully quiet, and with his arms crossed over his chest, Sanzo dozes.  Stuck between sleep and wakefulness, he half-dreams they’ve reached a cool stream.

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jibii April 23 2007, 01:24:08 UTC
God! The mental images I get from this fic (which is awesomely good, btw~~~~), especially Goku's hands in Sanzo's hair kjglkgjgjkgffffffff---- >w<)

<3 <3 <3 <3 <3!!!!

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eyesofshinigami April 23 2007, 02:11:23 UTC
*sniffs* Lucky Sanzo. I loved the image of Goku running his fingers through Sanzo's hair. It was sweet, and strangely erotic. *shrugs* Must be me, though.

And I liked the fact that Sanzo couldn't decipher reality from the mini-dream he was having. I've had that happen before, and it's crazy. You write a confused Sanzo very well, so kudos to you for that. *hearts*

Nice little drabble, though! I'm sorry to hear that you're stressed, though. *gives you a hug* -_-; We heart you anyway.

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gen50 May 8 2007, 08:43:20 UTC
a sleeping/sleepy sanzo.. one of my faves.
nice.

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speedtracer May 8 2007, 11:34:43 UTC
i love your 39 drabbles! XD

Sanzo's dream was funny and I like how confused Goku makes him feel.

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soliandxpyne May 8 2007, 18:03:59 UTC
Thank you very much. I wanted to try to protray that sort of dream that's not really a dream which you tend to fall into when you're dozing off. But as Goku continues to mature, I think he'll be making Sanzo feel confused more and more often, lol.

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3x9fallinggrace August 11 2007, 06:25:43 UTC
"Hey Sanzo, Goku laughs as he shucks his shirt and yanks off shoes and socks, remember that time you wrote all over me with the paintbrush? Well could you do it again? `Cuz I can’t get through."

THAT is just pure genius!

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