How do I fix my innability to write character development. I can't write chaptered stories, and the real reason (other than my innalility to skip amounts of time... I end up writing bloody day to day. but that's eaiser to work on) is that I can't... change the characters enough throughout the story. And I mean, like let them develop, not change their whole character. It's also hard to start a story, chaptered or one-shot. But with chaptered stories, I don't know weather to write a prologue, or just start is like woah!, or to do the whole, 'I'd never thought that I...' or 'he'd never known that...' (the whole, write like someone is remembering something.)
HELP?!? I really want to write my parapalegic Zemyx as a chaptered story, since there's not enough disability Kingdom Hearts slash out there, and there's even less Zemyx stories, and the Zemyx fandom is narrowed down more when you take out the one-shots. So really, could someone help me? Tell me what kind of begining you like best, or you think would be best for a disability slash fic.
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I was looking at that Organization XIII height list (
http://img170.imageshack.us/my.php?image=orgheightssidewv1.jpg ), and I noticed that Zexion has large feet. Larget than Axel's feet... Larxene has the smallest, but I think Axel might be a close second. Zexion's feet are, like, the same size as Lexaeus'. And suprisingly, Xigbar has small feet. Don't ask.
Well, I'll go size some other stuff. I'm some kind of weirdo...