beta a story for me maybe?

[solemnly_swear1]

Is there anyone who would be willing to go over a short Star Wars Anakin/Obi-wan fanfiction for me? It just seems to need a little going over. It just doesn't feel 100% right to me.

<3

ALSO - The Vulcan version of 'I wanna fuck you like an animal.' "I would find it aggreable if our behavior while engaging in sexual intercourse were animalistic in nature."