Fic: It's My Show, Baby (Do What I Say) | Mike/Kevin | NC-17

[solarcat05]

Title: It's My Show, Baby (Do What I Say)
Fandom: Bandom (TAI)/Jonas Brothers
Pairing: Mike Carden/Kevin Jonas
Rating: NC-17/FRAO
Wordcount: ~3,060
Warnings: Established relationship, bondage, D/s, possible dub-con. May be triggering for some readers.

Summary: Kevin says they never talk anymore, and it's true: they never talk, but Kevin talks all

Comments

[wayfarersgirl]

OMG YOU FINISHED. ADDING COMMENTS AS I READ...

she is too preoccupied with giving him looks of intense sympathy

HAHAHA MARINA. Exactly!!! I mean, Mike has to be a SAINT to put up with Kevin's nonstop chatter, right? :-D

wrists, elbows, ankles and knees tied to the frame by a careful selection of Kevin's more hideous scarves (Mike saw no reason his plan couldn't have side benefits), and perhaps the most hideous of all is looped through Kevin's mouth, tied behind his head

MIKE. YES THIS. IF YOU'RE GOING TO GO, GO ALL THE WAY. MAKE A STATEMENT.

"We are going to sit here," Mike says, "and watch Family Guy, and then I'm going to blow you."

IN THE CHAIR??? *IZ DED OF HOT IDEA*

"Okay then." Mike plants his knees on the carpet between Kevin's bound legs, sliding his hands up Kevin's thighs to the waistband of his boxers. "Can you lift up a little?"

HE IS FOR THE SERIOUS!!! OMG OMG GUHHHH.

he straightens up and scuffs at the carpet with his toes, curling them in the plush

The toescuff!! OH KEVIN ILU. SQUEE!!

His eyes are big and

[solar_cat]

LIKE. THIS COMMENT. I CAN'T EVEN. *FLAIL!*

I love Marina. She secretly kind of adores these boys she knew for 6hrs (total), and she hopes Kevin gets over his childhood duck-related traumas soon. XD

I had to put in the toescuff! It was IMPORTANT TO THE NARRATIVE! \0/ ...Also adorable. Adorable always wins with me. *G*

MIKE WILL ABSOLUTELY TAKE CARE OF HIM FOREVER AND KEVIN WILL BE INCREDIBLY HAPPY AND ALSO NOT TRY TO TALK ABOUT ~FEELINGS~ RIGHT AFTER MIKE GETS OFF TOUR UNLESS HE ~WANTS~ TO BE "PUNISHED" (WHICH HE WILL BE, BUT MIKE IS NOT-SO-SHOCKINGLY OKAY WITH THAT, AMIRITE?).

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! =D

[akire_yta]

HAHAHA, Kevin being deliberately a bad boy, complete with flutters of his eyelashes, so he can be 'punished'

now i am thinking of them trying role playing and ending up just bursting out laughing in a pile on top of the bed ;D

[solar_cat]

Considering Mike's "acting" skills, the two of them trying to role-play in bed would be HILARIOUS oh my god. XDDD

[psuedo_catalyst]

god, I can't remember the last time a dubcon fic made me laugh--seriously, girl, you've got skillz--I'm slightly inconherant because I was just about to go to bed but then I saw this and I couldn't not read it, and it packs such a punch for something so short you know?

Anyway, all kinds of props to you, or whatever the proper parlance would be if I were awake. Loved it!

[solar_cat]

Oh, yay! I didn't want the dub-con-y bits to be too super srs, so I'm glad it made you laugh! =D

And that "packs a punch" line makes me really happy because I was a little worried about the length of it, and establishing what I needed to establish, but hopefully I did good? XD Yay!

INCOHERENCY IS OKAY AROUND HERE.

[psuedo_catalyst]

You did so good with the setup. The background was there without being shoved down our throats, and you said everything that needed to be said without sounding like you were trying too hard.

[solar_cat]

\0/ Yay!

[crazybasketcase]

wow, such an amazing story. =)

[solar_cat]

Thank you so much! <3

[solar_cat]

Thanks so much! LOL, y'know, sometimes a man's gotta do what a man's gotta do. XD

[rishabree]

That was so wrong, and yet fluffy and adorable. You have a gift. :)

[solar_cat]

Awwww. You're making me blush! XD I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

(Also, I should say, your icon makes me *gleeface!* every time I see it!)

[rishabree]

(Thank you! I'm not really in the SGA fandom anymore, but I don't think I'll ever want to change it. I love it and the story it's from too much.)