Fic: Touched One Another (For the First Time?) // (Speed Racer, Racercest, NC-17)

[solarcat05]

Title: Touched One Another (For the First Time?)
Fandom: Speed Racer
Pairing: Racer X/Speed
Rating: NC-17
Wordcount: 3,240
Warnings: Porn. Really gratuitous porn. NSFW. Etc. Also, y'know, the whole gay incest thing. Enter at your own risk.

Summary: This is his chance to end this, he realizes acutely. He can stop this here, get back into the Mach 5

Comments

Very hot! And very sad at the end

[raythereign]

I have to say that this was incredibly erotic. You had all the tactile imagery down that I could feel what Speed felt. I was sad at the ending. I also kept wondering what Speed would feel if he knew that Racer X was Rex, that he'd just had sex with his brother and what kind of betrayal that would bring. Nice job!

Re: Very hot! And very sad at the end

[solar_cat]

Thank you so much! And extra thanks for leaving such a lovely comment! =D

It's an interesting pairing to me, because the whole "I'm not Rex" scene doesn't do anything to erase the very obvious connection between the two of them, and it's easy for me to see Speed reinterpreting that connection in this direction. I agree, it would definitely be interesting to explore his reactions to finding out the real truth. (I'm likewise interested in Rex's headspace, but I didn't want to get into it in this fic.) Incest pairings! Bring on the angst! \0/

[slanted_edges]

OMIGOD, THANK YOU. There is not nearly enough Speed Racer fic in the world -- and certainly not enough Racer X/Speed fic, so this is like . . . candy. ♥

[solar_cat]

You are so welcome!! =D I did not even know you were in this fandom! Awesome! \0/

I think I'm like, the porn version of Johnny Appleseed or something. "A rare pair in need of smut?? TO THE SOLAR-MOBILE!!" /0/

XD

<333!!

[secret_smile19]

Guh. Dead brain. Um...one thing that sticks out a lot is how you completely understand Speed's thoughts-- like how everything is related to cars (like the similie about him being like sparkplugs). Very Racer-ish. Then you have all the lovely images and feelings between the (brothers? how would that fall-out work, especially after Speed's found that connection?) two, which is just, for lack of a better word, hot.

...And then you explain how Speed's gotten to the mindset of "I have to go." All in all, this is a wonderful piece that would fit spot on in the movie-- with the exception of the NC-17 in a PG-esque movie part.

[solar_cat]

Thank you so much for the lovely feedback!! =D

I'm really thrilled that the "everything is related to cars" thing worked; I confess, I always get nervous doing something so thematic like that, since it can get... kitschy? kind of eyeroll-inducing? But then I figured, well, it is Speed, after all... XD So yes, I'm so glad you liked it!

As far as the fall-out if/when Speed finds out... Hm. Possibly I have incentive to write more, here. XD It's certainly interesting to think about! There are so many ways his reaction could go, really.

[bittenfeld]

a-ha! so that's the scene that got left on the cutting room floor...

"sweat and leather and oil and engine grease" - yes I suppose that's exactly what X would smell like... "a thousand sparkplugs all heaped together"... mm, Speed's not the only one...

I agree with Raythe - the tactile imagery - sensuous (in that it makes every sense vivid) and of course sensual to the nth degree!

And welcome to the comm - we're a small group but very friendly! And hope to hear more from you!!

[solar_cat]

Thank you for the welcome! =D It certainly does seem very friendly around here, and wow, the feedback is awesome! *adores long comments and is thusly having a happy day* It's certainly quite good incentive to stick around for a while! on top of how I'm a huge sucker for small fandoms! *loves*

Well, it's the scene that took place in my head, anyway. XDDD Ack, I'm letting my self-indulgence show! I'm really glad you enjoyed it, and thank you so much for the fantastic feedback! <3

[bittenfeld]

yes, I've been in the comm a year now, and I'm so happy I found everybody here. We're real good about bouncing ideas off each other, if someone gets stuck with writer's block, and sometimes we're emailing each other back and forth in the middle of the night! (sleep? what's that?)- it's just loads of fun!

I hope you'll like some of my fics too - I wrote a Speed & X-on-the-hood-of-the-Mach 5, some time ago... (I looove long comments too, and I'm not too proud to beg! - and that's my self-indulgence showing...!) A lot of my stories are under my pen-name Bara no Kishi.

Anyway, glad to have you aboard!

[solar_cat]

~Confession!~ I admit to not having read much of the comm yet. ^^;; I was working on this thing in fits and starts for so long that I didn't want to accidentally lift anything from anyone else! XD But hey, I've got lots of fic to read through, now! \0/ *makes a note that she is allowed to babble in any and all reviews to you* =D

Sounds fun! I really do love small fandoms; you definitely get a sense of community that sometimes the big fandoms lack. ^^ (Though I may have to avoid middle-of-the-night discussions if I want to be at all functional at work! That's actually a total lie, though, as anyone at twitter_trek could tell you.)

[munnin_odanin]

I’d like to start with welcome the Speed_fic and I think I love you! Hot, sweet and just damn beautiful! You have the unspoken balance between them just so perfect.

Stay with us please? I love your writing!

[solar_cat]

Thank you so much for the welcome! I'm really thrilled that you enjoyed the fic! (I always get nervous posting in new fandoms! Eep! XD )

Honestly, I'm never quite sure what I'm going to end up writing next, but the reaction to this fic has been quite lovely, and I'm tragically easy like that. *g* Plus, I do love these boys, so I'm hoping to keep writing them!