Fic - Two in the Bed (Johnny/Peter/MJ - for marvel_100)

[solarcat05]

Title: Two in the Bed
Fandom: Marvel Ultimate-verse
Pairing: Johnny Storm/Peter Parker/(Mary Jane Watson)
Rating: FRAO / NC-17
Wordcount: 482 according to MSWord.
Summary: Written in response to the marvel_100 challenge "Threesome". Smut. Yup. Just smut

Comments

[lucifers_toy]

*nods* I think this can be counted as a demand for a continuation.

That was brilliant. Loved it.

[solar_cat]

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. ^_^

[slanted_edges]

XD

It's just . . .

XD

(I'm not sure whether I should feel sorry for Mary Jane or not. I mean, in terms of ways to find out that your boyfriend is . . . er . . . being screwed by another man, this is certainly . . . startling, but hey! She certainly got something out of it.)

And woah. I have to say that I never imagined a time where I wouldn't be rather squicked by some hetero sex, but . . . I really didn't mind it here. (Ehgads, the sky is falling!)

I'm not sure if I can say much else without questioning my sanity, so -- you are an amazing writer. XD Really. You rawk, rawk, rawk!

(Although I think you should definitely write some exclusive Johnny x Peter smex soon, too.)

[solar_cat]

I wouldn't feel too sorry for MJ. Yeah, nearly heart-attack-inducing shock, but ... >.> Then she gets to be sexed up by two extremely prettyful men, so I think she came out on top and bottom and middle; they had a good time. (Yes, that was horrible. I'll stop myself any day now, I swear! *crosses fingers*)

Heh, I was rather worried about that, actually. That everyone would go, "Eeew, het!" and run the other way (I actually almost did the same thing when I was writing it!). XD I'm glad it didn't scare too many people off, if the comments are anything to go by. ^_^

(I shall work on exclusive smexings. I just FINALLY saw FF:RotSS yesterday. *beats self with wet noodle for being a horrible fangirl* Anyway, I came out of it with a few fic ideas, so hopefully there will be smexing soon. ^_^ )

<3!

[liliaeth]

I definitely wouldn't mind to see this continued*g*

[solar_cat]

Well, that's two definite votes for continuation, so it may be done. We shall see if I feel up to writing *gasp!* het! tonight. =D

[timemonkey]

Peter leaves the door unlocked while sexing Johnny? What if that had been Aunt May!?

I pictured it. T_T

Very nice pic, I was hoping MJ wouldn't freak.

[solar_cat]

If it was Aunt May... this really would NOT have been written for the "threesome" challenge. 0.o *shudders and tries to block that unfortunate mental image*

As for the unlocked door - no one ever said horny men were particularly intelligent. XD

[hyperactivator]

Well at least MJ will remember to lock the door.

[solar_cat]

*nod* She's the sensible one, it's true.