To counteract the negative energy I have going on right now, I'm posting this fic that I wrote for a number of reasons: 1. To answer a conversation I had with
senshixdoukeshi; 2. For the GP Fortnight; 3. For
miss_vichan's birthday (even though it's very very late).
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Gah, this brought tears to my eyes. Or maybe it was just that I was listening to some pretty intense music at the same time, which worked out meshing perfectly with the feeling of this fic, but either way it was beautiful. I can't think of any other word to use to describe it. Brilliantly written of course, and all the vivid imagery and the breathtaking moments between the seconds of Eiji's dive were amazing... but beautiful sums up everything about this story. The support these two have for each other, that unconditional love that follows them no matter where they go, the give and take and achingly sweet companionship, just beautiful.
This is a job well done ♥
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I love it when fiction and music go perfectly together to create just the right atmosphere. ^_^ I've always got music going, whether reading or writing. Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it!
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But now I'm just wondering... Where's the rest of the team during all of this? XD -prods- More, more!
Anyway, thanks for sharing. :3
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Ahaha! I'm glad that I succeeded in making them them, but without tennis. ^_~ The rest of the team... hmm. Wouldn't that be interesting to explore. *ponders*
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XD Very interesting. <3 You should do it. -prods-
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I'm not the biggest fan of first person, but this was really nice. It flowed well.
The way you wrote it really ah...you can think about all the things Eiji thought about in the course of a dive. Someone might not think so because there are lots of words, but for the images your words bring up, you can think of those things just that quickly...so
I liked this! Thank you!
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It's my solemn mission to make you read/like fiction/pairings/what have you that you normally wouldn't. Mwaha!
You're welcome!
...and damn it if I don't love that icon! KENN!!!
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That was so different, yet absolutly moving/touching/wonderful/I just don't KNOW!
This was an incredible story! Thank you for sharing. That's all that I can say.
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