[FIC] Takeoff and Landing (GP)

Nov 25, 2006 03:52

To counteract the negative energy I have going on right now, I'm posting this fic that I wrote for a number of reasons: 1. To answer a conversation I had with senshixdoukeshi; 2. For the GP Fortnight; 3. For miss_vichan's birthday (even though it's very very late).

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kooriyoukai November 25 2006, 04:26:26 UTC
*puddles*

Gah, this brought tears to my eyes. Or maybe it was just that I was listening to some pretty intense music at the same time, which worked out meshing perfectly with the feeling of this fic, but either way it was beautiful. I can't think of any other word to use to describe it. Brilliantly written of course, and all the vivid imagery and the breathtaking moments between the seconds of Eiji's dive were amazing... but beautiful sums up everything about this story. The support these two have for each other, that unconditional love that follows them no matter where they go, the give and take and achingly sweet companionship, just beautiful.

This is a job well done ♥

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solanum_d November 25 2006, 23:10:56 UTC
*hands you a towel*

I love it when fiction and music go perfectly together to create just the right atmosphere. ^_^ I've always got music going, whether reading or writing. Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it!

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xoq November 25 2006, 04:34:11 UTC
*_* That was beautiful. Your characterization was just perfect... That WAS Golden Pair. Minus tennis. XD Love. <3 I /really/ love Eiji's passion for Oishi and diving, how they intertwine but are still separate in that way, so it stays very true to the series. :D Go you!

But now I'm just wondering... Where's the rest of the team during all of this? XD -prods- More, more!

Anyway, thanks for sharing. :3

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solanum_d November 25 2006, 23:12:31 UTC
Nagayan!Hitsugaya!!!! I love your icon! ♥

Ahaha! I'm glad that I succeeded in making them them, but without tennis. ^_~ The rest of the team... hmm. Wouldn't that be interesting to explore. *ponders*

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xoq November 26 2006, 02:03:02 UTC
:DDD My friend __getit made it. X3 She makes wonderful icons... Which I... do not. XD

XD Very interesting. <3 You should do it. -prods-

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solanum_d November 27 2006, 22:36:31 UTC
Perhaps I will. ^____^ Any preferences?

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hamburgerjack November 25 2006, 04:55:22 UTC
You know, I think swimming would be it because some how, I just can't see it being gymnastics.

I'm not the biggest fan of first person, but this was really nice. It flowed well.

The way you wrote it really ah...you can think about all the things Eiji thought about in the course of a dive. Someone might not think so because there are lots of words, but for the images your words bring up, you can think of those things just that quickly...so

I liked this! Thank you!

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solanum_d November 25 2006, 23:14:22 UTC
I don't know... I seem to remember Oishi moonlighting on the rhythmic gymnastics mats. XD

It's my solemn mission to make you read/like fiction/pairings/what have you that you normally wouldn't. Mwaha!

You're welcome!

...and damn it if I don't love that icon! KENN!!!

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jiwoon November 25 2006, 05:05:47 UTC
There are no words- just amazing.

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solanum_d November 25 2006, 23:14:42 UTC
*beams* Thank you.

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dentelle_noir November 25 2006, 05:32:33 UTC
W.o.w.

That was so different, yet absolutly moving/touching/wonderful/I just don't KNOW!

This was an incredible story! Thank you for sharing. That's all that I can say.

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solanum_d November 25 2006, 23:15:16 UTC
It was my pleasure to share. I'm happy you enjoyed it.

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