Thirteen kinds of deadnacht_kindOctober 15 2006, 18:30:33 UTC
I love you with a passion met only by my utter distaste for bad anime heroines.
Your method of writing sex is so very interesting, because it's so very sensual and potent, yet doesn't possess the direct type of contact that, while delicious and meaningful if done correctly, more often appears.
I'm so very happy you wrote this, love and gratitude for you!
Re: Thirteen kinds of deadsolanum_dOctober 15 2006, 18:53:51 UTC
My pleasure, sweet pea. *grins*
I seem to only be able to write sex in a more roundabout way if I'm not writing Arai/Kachirou pr0n... hmm... I can only be a smut writer if I'm writing dirty shota, I guess.
I'm glad that you enjoyed it, though. Much love right back at ya!
I think my impression of things is a little... different... and that comes through in my writing or something. I'm glad you liked the phrasing, though.
Wow. I've never read Atobe/Jiroh before. I'm not overly fond of Hyotei and I don't like anything with Atobe in it usually. However, I really liked this piece. The melancholic tone was goregous! It wasn't too overbearing or not enough; it was just right.
I really liked this part:
He felt the tension of tennis-sculpted calves with the arches of his feet, toes curling against the fine hair. Hips brushed against the insides of his thighs; warm friction...
It's so simple, yet I imagined it perfectly in my mind when I read it.
If you get me hooked on Atobe/Jirou, you'd better be prepared to write more! I shall have to go fic-hunting now! ^_^
You don't like Hyoutei?! o_O I must admit that I have a rather huge fondness for them, but without sounding elitest, I'd like to say that my fondness for the school is a little different than most people's. I find their dynamics and team spirit unusual and fascinating. I think Atobe is a really interesting character, but it would take me a very long time to get into the details. He's not just a pretty face, a bit of snobbery, and a flashy persona with entourage.
I'm glad you liked the tone... I was trying to make it feel like a rainy night... I think that came across, which is good. ^_~
If I get you hooked on Atobe/Jiroh, I'll be proud of my work. ^___^ Then I'll recommend the best AtoJi I've ever read, if you'd like.
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Your method of writing sex is so very interesting, because it's so very sensual and potent, yet doesn't possess the direct type of contact that, while delicious and meaningful if done correctly, more often appears.
I'm so very happy you wrote this, love and gratitude for you!
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I seem to only be able to write sex in a more roundabout way if I'm not writing Arai/Kachirou pr0n... hmm... I can only be a smut writer if I'm writing dirty shota, I guess.
I'm glad that you enjoyed it, though. Much love right back at ya!
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I think my impression of things is a little... different... and that comes through in my writing or something. I'm glad you liked the phrasing, though.
Hugs and kisses to you, too.
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Nature... specifically the weather, kind of just placed itself in there. But I'm happy with the results, and happy that you liked it.
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I really liked this part:
He felt the tension of tennis-sculpted calves with the arches of his feet, toes curling against the fine hair. Hips brushed against the insides of his thighs; warm friction...
It's so simple, yet I imagined it perfectly in my mind when I read it.
If you get me hooked on Atobe/Jirou, you'd better be prepared to write more! I shall have to go fic-hunting now! ^_^
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I'm glad you liked the tone... I was trying to make it feel like a rainy night... I think that came across, which is good. ^_~
If I get you hooked on Atobe/Jiroh, I'll be proud of my work. ^___^ Then I'll recommend the best AtoJi I've ever read, if you'd like.
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