Elaine story

[sokorralewis]

I am taking the Elaine myth and dividing some of the major parts into a series of 500 word segments. So far I have two segments done.

Part One: Burning (Elaine and Lancelot have an affair and fight before he leaves Corbenic)

Part Two: Suffocation (Bors arrives to take care of the amorous Bromwell and finds that Elaine had Lancelot's son Galahad).

Part Three: Drowning (Elaine comes to Camelot and takes with Guinevere)

Part Four: Crying (Elaine and Lancelot figure things out)

The first two parts are done. There are two problems.

1. Getting a Beta reader
2. Do I post by segment or as one piece.

Is anyone interested in giving me some ConCrit on it?