Drabble: "That's Not Funny"

[xxiceyxx]

Ahoy there! New member of the community, but Tokkaneer since Toph and Sokka pretty much met one another. I've been a fanfic writing for quite some time now (couple of years) but this is my first Avatar related story I've ever written, so I'd be very grateful if you all could read and give me some feedback! :D Thanks!

Title: That's Not Funny

Comments

[xequth]

This is so something that Toph would do to Sokka and he'd definitely fall for it. Hilarious!

The only teeny-weeny bit of concrit I have is that the characters sounded a bit verbose and long-winded compared to how they normally are.

Other than that, really good and really IC and I hope to continue to write more Tokka moments. ^_^

[xxiceyxx]

Haha, thank you. ;D I thought the same as well... seeing as I have fallen for it.

Yeah, I definately see what you mean and thanks for pointing that out. I have to get the hang of writing shorter dialogue after writing such long-winded sentences for characters like House or Jack Sparrow. x)

Thank you very much for the comment and concrit! I really appreciate it and now have something to improve on for my next Tokka drabble.

And by the way, I love the icon. Teen Titans is also one of my avid fandoms and Raven was the most kick-ass character in that show. -guilty BBxRae shipper-

[xequth]

Thanks. I loved the show and the orginal comics! Raven was so my favourite character. Always thought BBxRae was cute, but after Terra and BB, I couldn't bear to split them up so I ended up an accidental Robin/Rae shipper. *looks guilty*

I look forward to your next drabble. The Tokka corner of the fandom is rather slow of late.

[xxiceyxx]

Do you mean the comics from back in the day or the current running ones? I've been reading the current ones. I love 'em. Especially the BBxRae moments. And lawl, that's okay. I always found Rob/Rae would be too serious for my taste. I really hated Terra, even before I shipped Beast Boy and Raven. I hated her for betraying the Titans. D:

Really? I always thought the Avatar universe had tons of fics going 24/7. But I'll get to writing something ASAP. ;D

Random question, but are there any really well written and in character fics for Tokka you can recommend? Nothing too heavy. I love random Tokka moments that are hilarious because it's hard to imagine them all serious for me at the momento.