Baby, I.

[softboys]

Title: Baby, I.
Pairing: Joonmyun/Zitao, briefly hinted Zitao/Sehun.
Rating: NC-17.
Word count: 4,9k.
Warnings: pwp, attempt at ~feelings, rimming, cursing.
Summary: Showering with Zitao is never just showering.
Notes: All errors are my own. I've been listening to GOT7's 고백송 on repeat while writing this so the title is from there. This was

Comments

[carcharias1130]

I said I would comment earlier but then...actual work...happened...at work... :(

BUT I AM HERE NOW and my god this was hot. I don't think you screwed up their personalities at all, and I really liked the bit about jm having to prepare to handle tao, i mean tao is so....much all the time i feel like even someone not infatuated with tao like jm is in here would have to prepare. So no, I think you did a really great job, especially the bits about tAO TRYING TO BE SMALLEr yeah ok i'm fine, that's just my heart on the floor.

Joonmyun kisses Zitao the way Zitao deserves to be kissed this and the whole section right after it, I had my face in my hands on the train I couldn't, it's too sweet and warm and I couldn't control my face, how do you do this.

"baby boy" and “Please, hyung, I’m - call me your -" and then he comes--just fuck right off, why must you, I'm so

I didn't expect it for some reason bc I'm dumb and then there it was and now I'm just in more emotional pieces, and also it was fucking hot, I wanted to throw my phone but also, in public.

I'm sorry this wasn't more coherent. Have I talked about how you write touch in this comment yet? No? Well you fucking write touch so well and that whole shower scene is too much for me and I swear I mention this in every comment but god damn I love the way you write touch.

Ok I'm done, bye, I reread parts of this to write this comment and I'm a mess again, goodnight
<3

[softboys]

maddie don't stress it tbh! ;;;;;

just the fact that you read it is more than enough for me tbh! ;;;;

Yeah i feel like tao would try to make himself smaller bc he wants to be babied and you kind of maybe have to be smaller for that and idk i'm not making any sense rn ;;;;

well i try to..idk write good descriptions and i feel like touch is important? especially in pwp, lol. ;;

thank you so much for reading and commenting bb! ;;;;; i really appreciate it<3