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bowie28 January 10 2010, 11:26:41 UTC
I'm totally intrigued. I hope to see more soon.

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sodakey January 11 2010, 04:28:13 UTC
I'm so glad. :) Thank you. Hope to have more up soon.

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jujuberry136 January 10 2010, 13:46:06 UTC
Very cool chapter, I loved Prentiss' POV and the hospital was really interesting.

Looking forward to finding out if Gideon was a hallucination or really there.

Thanks for sharing!

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sodakey January 11 2010, 04:26:33 UTC
Thank you. I'm glad Prentiss's pov worked. Though I (clearly) find Reid compelling, I really enjoy all the characters.

Thanks for reading. :)

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lilmoonbunny16 January 10 2010, 15:56:20 UTC
Yay! An update! I think it's interesting that Reid might not have really seen Gideon. I hope there will be more soon!!

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sodakey January 11 2010, 04:22:56 UTC
Thank you! Should be more soonish. End of next week, probably. :)

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water_soter January 11 2010, 04:28:41 UTC
*gapes* I can't believe you left it there!!! *gapes some more* I really can't believe you left it there. You truly enjoy to torture your faithful subjects!!! But it was wonderful and as usual your characterization was spot on. Now there's another part of the mystery put forward . . . was Gideon really there? *puts on thinking cap* I must medidate on this while rereading this multiple times. *worships the ground you walk on* :-P

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sodakey January 11 2010, 05:43:20 UTC
But... it was a good place to leave it. I needed to. You know I needed to.

And, hopefully that means you liked the chapter.

Now, down to business. I have a new overlord request: remember that list of ideas you had? Write one of them, dang it. :D

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_nextboldmove_ January 14 2010, 15:40:32 UTC

Oh Reid, please wake up and be okay! Also…I have a sneaking suspicion that Gideon is the unsub? Or at least up to no good, I dunno. Either way, thanks for sharing!

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sodakey January 15 2010, 00:33:01 UTC
You are delightful. And, I thank you.

Gideon as the unsub... I suppose only time will tell. :)

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