Missing the Key

[sobitxx]

Title: Missing the Key
Summary: Death is unforgiving.
Characters: She & he.
Genre: Angst/General.
Rating/Warnings: G/Depressing; mention of bleach-drinking, gun-shooting, and drunk driving.
Word count: 345
Author's Note: Written for brigits_flame September Main Contest (Second week). I am an angsty, angsty soul.

Comments

brigits_flame Editor Post

[thaneofcawdor]

Hello :) I have feedback to give you from my editing spree. Would you like my comments here or would you like them privately messaged to you? There's nothing negative in my comments, it's all quite positive! I'll leave the decision up to you, however.

Re: brigits_flame Editor Post

[sobitxx]

On my journal would be fine. Thanks! :]

Re: brigits_flame Editor Post

[thaneofcawdor]

Here goes

Re: brigits_flame Editor Post

[sobitxx]

Thank you!! :] for the edit & nice words, haha

Re: brigits_flame Editor Post

[dothesuperman]

you r fucking brilliant.