lost drabble: burned by our sins (jack/sawyer)

Mar 01, 2010 17:32

Title: burned by our sins
Character(s)/Pairing(s): jack/sawyer
Rating/Word Count: PG-13/R, 108
Summary: the thing about penance - it's not meant to be enjoyed Spoilers for s6.
A/N: Written for lost_in_108 prompt heat.

The midday sun peaks through the trees, burns his eyes until he has to squeeze them shut just to focus )

fic: lost, pairing: jack/sawyer, character: jack shepherd, character: james "sawyer" ford

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diandrahollman March 2 2010, 21:11:55 UTC
Heh. Great minds think alike, apparently. Except this is much less dark. Nice. :)

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angeldylan628 March 3 2010, 04:34:49 UTC
Thank you! I liked yours too. I wanted to go darker with mine, but I only had so many words to work with.

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diandrahollman March 4 2010, 18:55:33 UTC
Oh, thank you. I could never limit word count with my muse rambling on and taking stories in directions I never intended. I like the neatness of it in this case. Numbers = 108, 108th episode, 108 words. (I didn't notice the "8" in your word count before.)

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angeldylan628 March 5 2010, 00:08:06 UTC
Yeah, I was never good at writing drabbles because my muse was like yours. It rambled and got sidetracked. But ever since I started doing challenges at lost_in_108, I've gotten a lot better at it. It's been fun.

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siluria March 2 2010, 21:35:52 UTC
Oooooh - I really like this!!! I was hoping some J/S would come out of S6, but with the start of this season, I wasn't expecting it! So thank you!!!

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angeldylan628 March 3 2010, 04:35:59 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! I've actually found myself more inspired by this season to write J/S than I ever have before. Idk why.

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diandrahollman March 4 2010, 18:56:24 UTC
Maybe because we're getting so little interaction between them from cannon? *grumbles*

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eponine119 March 7 2010, 02:05:34 UTC
Very nice! You get a lot in those few words.

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angeldylan628 March 7 2010, 04:47:51 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)

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missy_useless April 18 2010, 13:13:52 UTC
It's been such a long time since I read Jack/Sawyer. I really loved this. Great work!

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