Comments | soapboxblues: lost ficlets: fire on the hill (sun/jin) + people for miles (charlie/claire)

angeldylan628 in soapboxblues

lost ficlets: fire on the hill (sun/jin) + people for miles (charlie/claire)

Jul 19, 2009 12:17

title: fire on the hill
character(s)/pairing(s): sun kwon (sun/jin)
word count/rating: 237, pg
summary: ficlet, set S5. she has spent her entire marriage looking for her husband.
A/N: For isis2015 who requested Sun. Used for sacred_20 prompt - lamentation

( She wonders if it's her fault that it ends this way )

character: sun kwon, pairing: charlie/claire, character: claire littleton, character: charlie pace, fic: lost, table:sacred_20, pairing: sun/jin

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angeldylan628 July 20 2009, 16:08:36 UTC

Thank you! I miss them too :(

bold_seer July 19 2009, 20:22:49 UTC

I loved your Sun ficlet - so much is conveyed in so few words.

She never saw him. She never saw him, and yet, she knows Jin - her Jin - is real. She knows the man she loves exists - somewhere - in some time period - in some plane. That Jin always slips through her fingers, leaves her looking.

This is truly beautiful.

(Actually, I could've quoted all 237 words.)

angeldylan628 July 20 2009, 16:09:42 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it!

isis2015 July 19 2009, 21:50:27 UTC

she realizes that looking for Jin leads down the same repetitive path.

Disappointed and alone.

And she cannot blame anyone but herself for not recognizing it sooner.

Damn. That's amazing. Well done, thank you so much. ♥

angeldylan628 July 20 2009, 16:10:21 UTC

You're welcome, sweetie! I'm glad you liked it!

eponine119 July 20 2009, 00:53:40 UTC

Oh, poor Charlie! This is so sad, especially the last line.

angeldylan628 July 20 2009, 16:16:14 UTC

Yeah, whenever I write Charlie, it just turns out sad. I think it's why I don't write my OTP as much as I'd like.

Thank you for commenting!

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angeldylan628 July 20 2009, 16:15:01 UTC

I'm still pissed that Sun has been running around avenging her husband and then trying to find her husband and she's gotten nothing out of it. And I'm sorry but I still don't buy that she would leave her daughter behind to trust Ben's word.

I hope Charlie's afterlife is better than what I wrote, but knowing TPTB, they would prefer angst for him even after his now meaningless death.