FIC: you burn me up bright and blow me out again zayn/liam

[snuffleslove]

title you burn me up bright and blow me out again
author snuffleslove
pairing zayn/liam
rating light R
warnings slash, swearing, boys being boys, mentions of depression and appetitie loss
summary zayn is fading and the boys don't know why (zayn's POV)
written for this prompt! (my first prompt and i'm excited!)

Comments

[luxover]

omg thank GOODNESS for the happy ending, let me tell you.

my thoughts as i read this:

Harry and Louis comforting him, a;sldkfj;aslkdjf omg presh. and his voice was painfully gentle and Zayn was reminded suddenly of how much older he seemed. love this line, love love love love it is perfection, the end.

OMG AND NOW LIAM THINKS THERE’S SOMETHING GOING ON BETWEEN ZAYN AND LOUIS OMG NOOOOOOO

Omg no is he going to pick someone up after that cute, adorable bit in bed with liam? No no no no no zayn no.

Omg no that’s breaking my heart, how liam was his first kiss and probably could’ve been his first everything else if he wasn’t being so stupid about it

and fuck they weren't quite as beautiful, but they were the exact same shade of brown sob sob sob sob zaynnnnn

ahmahgah harry and Louis

omg what no they’re fighting why why why boyyyyyssss just make out already!!!!

ah. there's the kissing. okay. whew.

lmao but seriously, ace job :)

[snuffleslove]

yay thank you so much! glad you enjoyed it!

[somber_waves]

this was so, so lovely. i had tears in my eyes the whole time. it was beautifully angsty while remaining subtle, and the ending was perfect, too. just, ugh, amazing.

ty!

[snuffleslove]

yay! i'm so glad you liked it, your comment made me so happy.

especially since, you're the OP for the next prompt i'm trying to fill hahah

(it's done btw, just in the process of being beta-ed. it's 10K. i have NO idea how that happened. i hope you like the new one too!)

Re: ty!

[somber_waves]

omg im so excited, thank you! that prompt is obviously in very capable hands. i just hope i can live up to your talent in your fill! im warning you ive never written fic before but 5 times fic is always a first-timers best friend, lol.

Re: ty!

[snuffleslove]

you're going to be great :) and i would love to beta for you if you need :)

we'll have to do a private exchange while the kinkmeme is down x

[shoreparty]

Hey! So I finally got around to reading this, and sigh...all of the feeelings. I love that you've given us Zayn's POV and how deeply shutting himself down hurts the entire band. The boys work really well together in this and the ending ugh, thank god, I just squealed :) Oh boyyyyys.

[snuffleslove]

yay! thank you i'm so glad you liked it :)
i feel like zayn's pov is the only one i can write haha

[lissabear02]

Sorry it's taken me so long to comment on this. I've had the tab open on my browser since last night, but I didn't get the chance to sit down and read it until just now. I really like the dynamic between Zayn and Louis in their scene together. And it breaks my heart, the way he tries to act normal with Liam but can't. And yay for happy endings.

[snuffleslove]

ty! x

[laakea]

Thanks for adding me. I just had the chance to read this and I loved it. There's so much angsty Liam fic out there (which I love) but it was wonderful to read angsty Zayn. I'm not good at feedback but I wanted you to know how much I enjoyed this story. I love it when a story gives me all the emotional angsty feels that makes me want to curl up with a bottle of alcohol and a pack of cigarettes and your story did the job so thanks for this. I can't wait to read more from you.

[snuffleslove]

ty for your sweet comment! x

i'm actually putting up a fic tonight that is 10K worth of angsty!Zayn complete with a smoking kink! You'll have to let me know what you think!

x