[SJFF] dancing in the pouring rain

[snowychrys]

Title: dancing in the pouring rain
Pairing: EunHae
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance, Angst
Type: One-shot
Summary: It was on a rainy night that he had first laid eyes on the other; now he is left alone, trying desperately to hold on to those memories.

Author's Notes: Not the conventional stuff you read from me, I know. This was inspired by one of my Facebook

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[starbursts132]

*shocked, staring at the screen not quite believing it's over*..............how did you manage to make me feel so many different emotions in on story?!

kay, at first i was like "Eunhyuk dancing in the rain would be sooooo AMAZING!!" and i was kinda laughing at Donghae for being a stalker. Then when they actually talked, i was super happy when Eunhyuk said that Donghae was a stalker because that was what i was thinking before. then i was like, "how could Donghae not realize that he was his neighbor?!" but i was excited that they were neighbors you know, because that gives them more chances to see eachother.

but then Eunhyuk started pushing Donghae away, so that pretty much got rid of my happiness. TT__TT

But then they kissed!! and i was like "YESSSSS!!!" and that brought my happiness back. then it seemed like their relationship was all flowers and sunshine with unicorns dancing on rainbows.

........but then the ending. ;~~~~~~~; it was beautiful....but it crushed any happiness i once had in me into a million pieces and i just wanted to hug both of them and shove them back together. poor Donghae, dancing in the rain because of Eunhyuk, and the last line *insert frustrated cry of a fangirl who had her ship torn apart*

i'm seriously considering memming this. i think i will. d(^-^)b just because it's so amazing and i love it.

*i'm hugging you right now if you couldn't tell because you deserve hugs and just urrghhhh. HUGS!!*

[snowychrys]

omg, thank you so much for the long comment ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ♥ I was beginning to worry how this fic would turn out, because I'm not used to writing slash lol.

The main reason why I put Hyukjae as the dancer in the rain was because I could really see him doing it (and looking smoking hot at the same time too ;A;) I was actually debating with myself about how I should set EunHae up, but decided that them being neighbours would be the easiest way out XD

I'm so sorry for breaking your ship ;___; I wanted to write a happy ending for this, but realised how 678467948678957 of my other stories mostly have a happy ending, so I opted for the more angsty one instead. Also got some input from my dear beta-reader who wanted to see angsty!EunHae lol.

Thank you so much once again for reading this ㅠㅠㅠㅠ♥ and for memming this too, omg. Thank you T^T