Sadly, our dear
le_culdesac has had a change in her schedule and is therefore unable to complete the beta as we had hoped. T_T (Thanks for all the work so far chica! It was truly a pleasure to work with you. :DDDD)
In the light of this,
buoy and I are requesting beta assistance from any kind soul who have time and interest to do the following:
★suggest alternative word usage, correct grammar, etc (technical stuff)
★give opinion on characterisation, plot progression, etc
★point out the "???" and "!!!" parts encountered
(As with last time, I am trying to not ask in
kirkspock because I want to keep the whole thing low-profile....)