loved it. it was HOT and SEXY and really well written. “The only difference is that now we’ll actually be having sex instead of thinking about having it.” hehehe. so true. we all know they are thinking about it. CONSTANTLY! :D
i can't wait for the second part so hurry *nudge* *nudge* ;D
I'm working on the second part. You can thank my lovely beta for convincing me to post in chapters. I was trying to be all responsible and finish the thing first.
I'm glad you liked it! It turned out waaay smuttier than I'd intended...
you know, I didn't quite imagine it that way either, though I did consciously want to try something different...but then I picked the word. and the image popped into my brain. and wouldn't leave me alone. and then when i thought about it...well I had a line that it killed me to cut while editing b/c it just really didn't flow any more. it was something like "it was fated to happen that way, they'd agreed later. Or, more accurately, Laura told Bill it was the only way his stubborn ass was ever going to get it together and let anything happen." cause just, yeah. I can see that.
I just reread that and I hope it makes sense. I literally just got up. I rarely make sense before noon.
but i'm relieved it works. I was afraid I was forcing it. i'm glad the emotion is coming through though...I was worried it was just a smutfest. not that there's anything wrong with that...
I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I'm working on the rest. Hopefully, I can get a good bit finished this weekend...
Well..your muse might be right..but as long as you come up with SOMETHING LIKE THIS...I say no...Yes EGOIST..but ahhh...I just need my daily dose of SMUT..that is all..and your muse might be right..my muse says it all the time..
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loved it. it was HOT and SEXY and really well written. “The only difference is that now we’ll actually be having sex instead of thinking about having it.” hehehe. so true. we all know they are thinking about it. CONSTANTLY! :D
i can't wait for the second part so hurry *nudge* *nudge* ;D
thank you so much for writing and posting this!
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I'm working on the second part. You can thank my lovely beta for convincing me to post in chapters. I was trying to be all responsible and finish the thing first.
I'm glad you liked it! It turned out waaay smuttier than I'd intended...
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you know, I didn't quite imagine it that way either, though I did consciously want to try something different...but then I picked the word. and the image popped into my brain. and wouldn't leave me alone. and then when i thought about it...well I had a line that it killed me to cut while editing b/c it just really didn't flow any more. it was something like "it was fated to happen that way, they'd agreed later. Or, more accurately, Laura told Bill it was the only way his stubborn ass was ever going to get it together and let anything happen." cause just, yeah. I can see that.
I just reread that and I hope it makes sense. I literally just got up. I rarely make sense before noon.
but i'm relieved it works. I was afraid I was forcing it. i'm glad the emotion is coming through though...I was worried it was just a smutfest. not that there's anything wrong with that...
I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I'm working on the rest. Hopefully, I can get a good bit finished this weekend...
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I am glad that your muse is alive and doing well..::giggles:: and can get us some awesome fics!
Can't wait for next part to be here..::feeds muse::
Thank you for sharing!
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Thanks for the nice comments. Feedback = love. I'm glad you liked it!
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Sorry..but LOL....bwahahaa...
Well..your muse might be right..but as long as you come up with SOMETHING LIKE THIS...I say no...Yes EGOIST..but ahhh...I just need my daily dose of SMUT..that is all..and your muse might be right..my muse says it all the time..
LOL
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