Fic: Savior (3/?)

[sneaky_in_red]

Title: Savior
Author: sneaky_in_red
Fandom: Legend of the Seeker
Pairing: Kahlan/Cara
Rating: PG-ish
Disclaimer: Doesn't belong to me. Obviously.
A/N: Again, as usual, I'm not sure about this chapter. And at the moment I'm having a huge writer's block. Yes, I have written more chapters but I'm actually this close of deleting them and start over again. I

Comments

[chickinwhite]

Aww, I like it! It is so Cara to be annoyed at every helpful hand, and so much Kahlan, never taking her eyes off of her.
Yes Richard, you have a serious problem... Kahlan slowly leaves your side :)
I can´t wait for their village-sharing-room-time... :)
A lovely read!

[sneaky_in_red]

Village sharing-room will be a bit difficult to write, since I don't want them to be together just yet. I have to restrain myself. XD

Thank you for reading and for taking your time to comment. Means a lot to me :)

[olli01a]

I like the way Kahlan tries to protect Cara and at the same time fights herself to hold back from being overprotective. But I would like to come to know why Kahlan suddenly is so protective about Cara. I miss an exploration about Kahlan's feelings for the Mord Sith.

[sneaky_in_red]

Thank you again for the input.

Yes, I haven't actually conveyed the reason why Kahlan is suddenly so protective about Cara. Thank you for reminding me. I think I focus too much on the details and actions and plot that I neglected this part.

There will be an explanation about it, of course.. and probably more so in flashbacks. I hope you aren't tired with flashbacks.

[olli01a]

Don't worty. Can't wait to see what you will come up with.