I am reminded in the memory within DH of Phineus calling Hermione a Mudblood and Severus telling him not to use that word. This scene really shows the depth of how that single word changed his life. I also like how you included the fact that there was really nothing to show between him appologizing to Lily and him begging Dumbledore before that fatal event. I believe you have really captured all of that in this scene. Incredible Snarky...as usual. Thank you for writing.
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Seriously, this is a great framing device and I can't wait to see where it goes.
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I like the term 'framing device', too... and that's exactly what this was. Nothing much happened in it, but it had to be written nonetheless.
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