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Completed fic - Girl Stuff - PopFic

Mar 31, 2008 07:40

Girl Stuff
a word2urmomma challenge fic by SnarkyLlama

8,100 words
(Lynn-centric Britney/Justin)
None of this is real, yo.

Now as a podfic! (21MB MP3; 57 min)

Summary: Britney's got a schoolgirl crush.

( She wouldn't have paid Justin much attention if it weren't for his mother, Ms. Harless. )

*nsync, popslash

Comments 21

nopseud March 31 2008, 14:04:35 UTC

This is made of awesome. MADE OF AWESOME. I love the ending -- absolutely perfect. Also, Catholic!schoolgirl!JC is making me break out into giggles whenever I picture him. You win!

llamabitchyo March 31 2008, 14:19:45 UTC

Yay! I am so glad that you prodded me to write the ending and that made me pause enough to rethink it and get it right.

Catholic!schoolgirl!JC makes me positively giddy. :)

puszysty March 31 2008, 16:15:40 UTC

And she wasn't even going to think about Terri and Fred 'cause... yikes! She was going to be way cooler than that when she was grown up. Hahaha!

omg, ew, JC in a schoolgirl outfit is not an image I want in my head :P

You do an excellent job of writing Britney.

llamabitchyo March 31 2008, 16:42:06 UTC

JC in a schoolgirl outfit is not an image I want in my head

*evil laughter*

You do an excellent job of writing Britney.

Thank you! ... Though I'm not sure that's a good thing. I keep thinking in that same narrative voice now and that's a little scary!

phaballa March 31 2008, 16:21:03 UTC

Oh, holy SHIT, this is the best thing ever! I... have no words for the amazingness of this. I mean, first off, the JOSHLYNN and how fucking perfect was that. But your Britney voice is so so so perfect and adorable and perfect. The Justin/Britney parts (and who knew I was a secret Justin/Britney shipper? NOT ME! Can they please get back together??) were just amazing. The build up, the Lynn Obsession. Oh man. I'm going to be reading this fic on repeat for forever. I love it SO MUCH. I want to podfic it RIGHT now so I can have it on my iPod and listen to it at the gym. OMG. I love it.

Can you tell how much I love it?? \0/ This challenge was completely worth it, if ONLY for this fic. So perfect.

llamabitchyo March 31 2008, 16:48:48 UTC

*blushes*

I am so glad you like it... since it's your darn fault that I discovered that I was a secret Justin/Britney shipper. (I so did not expect that!)

This fic really surprised me and I'm so pleased with it when I'm not thinking, "OMG, I wrote *what*?!?" So thank you for doing the challenge 'cause this would have never happened otherwise.

phaballa March 31 2008, 16:54:56 UTC

I want to read ten more amazing Britney/Justin fics now. Somehow... I doubt there are many out there. But this is just. Man. Your Britney voice is SO GOOD. We need someone with a cute southern accent to do a podfic of this. I really really love it.

The best part, seriously? When Britney wears her Lynn panties and has her fantasy. And like, not to get all deep about it, because I mean, right, but it totally made complete sense to me because of what a shitty mom Britney has and how she's been searching for someone to take care of her for her whole life, and goes right along with my theory that half of why she dated Justin was because she wanted to be part of a real family.

♥

llamabitchyo March 31 2008, 17:15:52 UTC

I want to read ten more amazing Britney/Justin fics now.

I think that would be a very frustrating search. Though... you do like badfic, so maybe it wouldn't be too painful. (But, I'm tempted now to try going back to some popslash sites to see if some of the good slashers have done Britney/Justin fics. Because I do have a hankering for it now.)

Your Britney voice is SO GOOD.

And that's ironic or something, because I could barely watch the Britney DVD I got for research because I was convinced that she'd already been brainwashed and wasn't really the same girl as her "back home" segment on MMC.

The first serious "creative writing" I did was a short story in the p.o.v. of an 8 y.o. girl. (I think it was 8.) This voice reminds me of that, even though Brit's much older. I also borrowed heavily from one year in Southern Georgia and a couple years in Southern Illinois (which was at least hick enough, though not really Southern).

And like, not to get all deep about it, because I mean, right:) I did end up with quite a few deep ( ... )

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boomingvoice March 31 2008, 21:22:06 UTC

Good god! SO fucking cute, and Britney's Lynn obsession is fucking beautiful, and britney-the-detective is adorable (a list! there was a list!) and the JOSHLYNN was excellent. Linebacker shoulders! Bwah.

llamabitchyo March 31 2008, 21:35:19 UTC

Thank you!

I really wanted lots of the JOSHLYNN, but then Detective Britney wouldn't have had the fun of figuring it all out. Brit should get to feel clever sometimes.

bououou April 1 2008, 03:41:14 UTC

That was really good.
Britney and JC/Lynn.
And I want to see JC dressed as a school girl now.
I kept thinking: this is how it is inside Britney's head.

llamabitchyo April 1 2008, 11:52:43 UTC

Thank you!

And I want to see JC dressed as a school girl now.

Yes! I want to spread the love for schoolgirl!JC. Except maybe not the pigtails...

:)