I came here with a load, and it feels so much lighter since I've met you.

[snarkwithasmile]

Fandom: Nabari no Ou
Pairing: Yoite/Miharu
Rating: PG I guess?
Summary: One of the million ways things could turn out.
Notes: Indirect spoilers for Yoite's past? Not necessarily compliant with the last chapter or two of the manga? Gross misinterpretation of the working of Japanese food establishments, of which I know nothing about?

When Sora and his

Comments

[lybell]

That was very very sweet. *sigh* Fics like these will keep me feeling better until we learn what actually happens. I really hope it'll be something like this. Good job! ^_^

P.S.: I love "Green Eyes"! ^_~

[snarkwithasmile]

I know, right? I just want these boys to both be happy. That's all. Hopefully the manga will provide it. ;_; Hopefully.

Oh man, Green Eyes is such an excellent song, and I think of Miharu and Yoite every single time I hear it. It's just so perfectly from Yoite's perspective! and it is the first track on the Miharu and Yoite soundtrack that exists solely in my head right now.

Thank you so much for your comment! ^^

[lonelyblkviolet]

Beautiful. It was sweetly sublime, and it just brought a smile to my face, and left this nice feeling in me. Your writing style is not too detailed, and gives us just enough, it's great. And this idea... Oh, I simply love it.

Keep writing <3

[snarkwithasmile]

Oh, wow, thank you very much! Your comment pretty much made my afternoon, just so you know.

I know in my head that just wishing Yoite's mom survived would probably not miraculously solve every problem, but it'd be completely awesome if it did, wouldn't it? ^_~

[lonelyblkviolet]

I'm glad <3

It definitely could be a start of a completely different world, perhaps just as you wrote <3 Which is why this fic made me happy.

[snarkwithasmile]

why this fic made me happy.

Good! That was pretty much my intent, so that makes me happy. ^^ I just get so sad any time I think about Yoite being erased or really any other ending that involves them not skipping merrily off into the sunset together that I had to write something sappy and positive to fill the void.

[punchbiopsy]

This was exceptionally well written. It's adorable, and made well...my morning! (I shouldn't be up this late.) Do keep writing ♥

[snarkwithasmile]

Pssht, sleep is for the weak, I say.

Thanks a bunch for your comment! ^^ And I will do my best!

[seitic]

; A; omg

this was beautiful. very well done. ♥

[snarkwithasmile]

:DDD Thank you so much!

[snarkwithasmile]

I know, right?! I was like, "guh, I cannot handle this overwhelming depression, I need ultra happy alternate universe scenario right now, it is the only way I can cope!"

Thanks so much for commenting!