I liked how Seth waited...and waited...and waited...for Ryan to stop laughing. And "Let's go make everything right with the world" by playing Playstation was great, too.
Ok - I love you. You are my newest, bestest friend. That was great. Please, please, please remember to cross post to oc_fic so everyone there can get a chance to read this for themselves, cause it's priceless!!! Thank you so much. I'm glad you picked this sentence - it was actually the first one I thought of.
*snorts* Only you, smc, would come up with a sentence like this. Poor snapsparagus. But what I was thinking is that she took a page from your book, S, and out smc'd smc!
Seth in black turtleneck to 'sleuth'--- against the white stucco of the poolhouse- LOL! And panicked that Ryan might have a big gay relationship? Better yet!
But seriously, as well as you played the humor, you also portrayed a deeper Seth, one capable of a sincere apology....once's he's meddled, eavesdropped and jumped to *serious* conclusions. *grin* And I really like the image of Sandy stepping aside to let Seth experience his well-deserved 'kid Chino' consequences.
“Let’s go make everything right with the world. Let’s go play Playstation.” awwwwwwww
Thanks for this!
ETA: I hope you don't mind I'm friending you- I'd like to try and keep up with your writing.
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This was funny. Thanks!
I liked how Seth waited...and waited...and waited...for Ryan to stop laughing. And "Let's go make everything right with the world" by playing Playstation was great, too.
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Thanks for the giggles!
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Thank you so much.
I'm glad you picked this sentence - it was actually the first one I thought of.
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I just cross-posted. Thanks for the reminder.
:)
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What this all means is that ya done good, kid.
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But seriously, as well as you played the humor, you also portrayed a deeper Seth, one capable of a sincere apology....once's he's meddled, eavesdropped and jumped to *serious* conclusions. *grin* And I really like the image of Sandy stepping aside to let Seth experience his well-deserved 'kid Chino' consequences.
“Let’s go make everything right with the world. Let’s go play Playstation.” awwwwwwww
Thanks for this!
ETA: I hope you don't mind I'm friending you- I'd like to try and keep up with your writing.
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And I could totally see Seth trying to be "stealth" like that to find out about Ryan's secret.
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