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is it cause you don't mean it, or cause i don't feel it

Aug 27, 2010 17:30

title: just another heat wave
rating: pg
fandom: football
word count: 423
prompt: 08, crash
pairing: mesut, mesut/marko
summary: mesut just crashes.
notes: before mesut transferred to real, obviously. really sorry about the crappiness of this fic ): i've come to the realisation that i can't write mesut, which is really unfortunate ):

( He always thought that friendships were easy. )

club: werder bremen, club: real madrid, team: spain, fandom: football, pairing: david villa/david silva, rating: pg-13, character: mesut oezil, club: manchester city, pairing: mesut/marko, team: germany, club: barcelona, rating: pg

Comments 27

gdgdbaby August 28 2010, 00:25:36 UTC

SLDFJGSDKFG HOW CAN YOU SAY THAT YOU DON'T KNOW HOW TO WRITE MESUT, KILLS YOU

THIS IS GREAT AND PER-FECT (USES PER ICON) AND T_T MESUT/MARKO T_T WHY SO FABULOUS FLAILS EVERYWHERE.

also the ds/dv T_T ide ship them but :( it was so good :( oh my heart. nat why do you do this to me T_T

gdgdbaby August 28 2010, 04:16:30 UTC

OH YEAH I FORGOT. MY FAVORITE PART IS STILL:

“Yes,” you reply, and the word is so, so heavy on your tongue.

GAHHHHHHH SILVA

snapshot August 28 2010, 23:33:09 UTC

♥ T_____T

snapshot August 28 2010, 23:32:55 UTC

lmfao waylt, embarrassment ~_~

STOP IT WITH THE PER-THING IT'S NOT GOING TO CATCH ON! sighs!

i don't do anything to you ):

elemersglue August 28 2010, 00:39:36 UTC

It should hurt, but it doesn’t.

(Maybe this is where the new beginning starts, maybe, just maybe.)

Nooo DNW new beginnings :(

snapshot August 28 2010, 23:33:56 UTC

new beginnings suck most of the time ):

thank you for reading ♥

casi_casi August 28 2010, 01:14:07 UTC

The David/David is amazing. I love the use of the second person - everything he feels is so tangible and hits the reader right in the gut. III was my favourite, because the fear of 'losing him' is just so palpable and painful. Really well written. Thank you for this.

snapshot August 28 2010, 23:34:49 UTC

i'm really glad you liked the use of second person! i was really nervous about it tbh, since i don't usually write in second person (:

thank you for reading ♥!

influira August 28 2010, 02:13:44 UTC

what the fuck, the 2nd one literally made me sob. AHHHHHHHHH PLEASE WRITE MORE OFTEN oh my god. this is gorgeous.

snapshot August 28 2010, 23:35:41 UTC

T____T /hands you tissues

ahh, i'll try to write a few more pieces before school starts (: thank you for reading ♥

krisseems August 28 2010, 03:38:05 UTC

This was so good. I was waiting for some angsty Davids leaving Valencia fic and not a lot has been around. This was very satisfying.

snapshot August 28 2010, 23:36:42 UTC

oh, i'm glad you liked it! i wasn't really sure about if i pulled it off!

thank you for reading ♥